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Haiku #15

A shadow is cast The blue is defined by space As the clouds float by

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/18/2010 1:17:00 PM
Dear Dakarai: This is a great poem!!! Very descriptive and to the point. Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poem. I hope that you have a great day. Peace: Sheol
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:13:00 PM
I like that way the first and last lines work together. A lot of depth for just three lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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