Haiku #15

A shadow is cast

The blue is defined by space

As the clouds float by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 18, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Dear Dakarai: This is a great poem!!! Very descriptive and to the point. Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poem. I hope that you have a great day. Peace: Sheol
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May 17, 2010 at 4:13 PM
I like that way the first and last lines work together. A lot of depth for just three lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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