Haiku 14

The dreaming highway,
a wide-open spacious life. 
Zero at the bone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 4:43 PM
quite an interesting one with the zero at the bone line!
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Lines just pop into my mind, and sometimes they seem to work with the haiku; not always.
Squyres Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Thanks for reading my "Spindled Mettle" and your comment. I like your haiku.... it's real !!
Jordan Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 6:42 PM
Thanks again for reading it and commenting. J
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Very good, Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 11:48 AM
Thanks for reading it, as always. It's good to hear from you. J
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