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Haiku 14

The dreaming highway, a wide-open spacious life. Zero at the bone.

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Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 PM
quite an interesting one with the zero at the bone line!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/27/2013 5:16:00 PM
Lines just pop into my mind, and sometimes they seem to work with the haiku; not always.
Date: 2/19/2013 4:35:00 PM
Thanks for reading my "Spindled Mettle" and your comment. I like your haiku.... it's real !!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/19/2013 6:42:00 PM
Thanks again for reading it and commenting. J
Date: 2/19/2013 10:46:00 AM
Very good, Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/19/2013 11:48:00 AM
Thanks for reading it, as always. It's good to hear from you. J

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