Haiku 14

The dreaming highway, a wide-open spacious life. Zero at the bone.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 PM

quite an interesting one with the zero at the bone line!

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/27/2013 5:16:00 PM

Lines just pop into my mind, and sometimes they seem to work with the haiku; not always.

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/19/2013 4:35:00 PM

Thanks for reading my "Spindled Mettle" and your comment. I like your haiku.... it's real !!

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/19/2013 6:42:00 PM

Thanks again for reading it and commenting. J

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2013 10:46:00 AM

Very good, Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/19/2013 11:48:00 AM

Thanks for reading it, as always. It's good to hear from you. J