Haiku 14

a falcon soars
surveying his prey...
field mouse runs for cover

10/13/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Wonder who won? Did the Falcon go away hungry or did the mouse give his all?...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Been awhile since I saw you on here..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Yep, this is one easily brought to mind and pictured, Phyllis. well done. hey it could even be a scary ku!!!
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Like your haiku 14 < > Well done Phyllis - Wishing you a lovely weekend! -oxox love Anne-Lise
St.Cross Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 1:11 PM
‡ I Love Precious Little Micies, Dear Beautiful Phyllis. Haha, I Would Run Too If I Saw A Falcon Surveying My Hair ? Don't Wish To Become Part Of The Baby Falcons Bedding. Lovely. Love, Rachel ‡
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