Haiku 14

a falcon soars surveying his prey... field mouse runs for cover 10/13/12

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/18/2012 10:54:00 AM

Wonder who won? Did the Falcon go away hungry or did the mouse give his all?...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Been awhile since I saw you on here..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 2:48:00 PM

Yep, this is one easily brought to mind and pictured, Phyllis. well done. hey it could even be a scary ku!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2012 2:19:00 PM

Like your haiku 14 < > Well done Phyllis - Wishing you a lovely weekend! -oxox love Anne-Lise

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/13/2012 1:11:00 PM

‡ I Love Precious Little Micies, Dear Beautiful Phyllis. Haha, I Would Run Too If I Saw A Falcon Surveying My Hair ? Don't Wish To Become Part Of The Baby Falcons Bedding. Lovely. Love, Rachel ‡