Haiku

Suddenly
the birds fly away
it is my turn


Stopped all
years in an instant
looking at the Sun


Reassured:
there ’s something similar
to me ’n’ a river


In combat
at the river mouth
the waters win

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Jose Levio

Date: 4/11/2025 2:28:00 PM

José Levio (=José Leva y Wimmer) or Lévai Wimmer József (=Lévai József).

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/14/2024 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jose Levio
Date: 3/6/2025 4:05:00 PM

Thanks for your response.