Haiku

Suddenly the birds fly away it is my turn Stopped all years in an instant looking at the Sun Reassured: there ’s something similar to me ’n’ a river In combat at the river mouth the waters win

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Jose Levio

Date: 4/11/2025 2:28:00 PM

José Levio (=José Leva y Wimmer) or Lévai Wimmer József (=Lévai József).

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/14/2024 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jose Levio
Date: 3/6/2025 4:05:00 PM

Thanks for your response.