Haiku 13 Bed

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A dry empty creek bed, small trees and tall glass pushed sideways gives testimony to past storms. As the wind picks up and the rain begins to fall it’s not long before a deluge of water fills the creek. Within a few minutes, the calm is exploding into a chaotic action. . .

ravaged empty bed
                                           clouds building, gully washer
flood me with your love









David Meade
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Kp Nunez

Date: 3/22/2015 2:05:00 AM

Wow...!!!

Cynthia Jones

Date: 2/26/2015 6:20:00 AM

David, this Haiku is brilliant. Quite imaginative. Well done my friend. Keep up with the great writes. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2014 3:48:00 PM

From emptiness to fulfillment...let love's flood flow! Another top rated haiku, David! // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/1/2014 9:12:00 AM

Nice expectation to be flooded in life with love. Lucky one is who gets that. Beautifully worded, my lovely friend, in haiku. Loved always,bl

Eve Roper

Date: 10/31/2014 12:43:00 PM

nice work , I am enjoying your Haiku

David Meade
Date: 10/31/2014 1:36:00 PM

I love the way we can read each other's works and be encouraged by the words. All the best.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2014 9:37:00 PM

really nice work, Maybe one of your best!

David Meade
Date: 10/31/2014 1:35:00 PM

I better stop now!! all the best.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2014 7:08:00 AM

Very creative and passionate work..Unusual Haiku..Thanks for stopping by..The cat seems to be on the hunt now that the weather has cooled down..I don't like for her to eat so much wild game for she will start to lose weight..She is the longest cat I have ever seen and tends to be thin..Maybe it will get cold enough soon so that she will stop hunting..Sara

David Meade
Date: 10/30/2014 12:49:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I know I push the bounds a Haiku -- I appreciate your indulgence! I would love to see a picture of the long hunting cat!

Jasmine Cruz

Date: 10/30/2014 12:17:00 AM

I like this David, storms can mean so much from relationships to the rain. and yes they can flare up quickly and its up to us to put out the flames. thanks for sharing

David Meade
Date: 10/30/2014 12:50:00 PM

Thank-you for visiting . . . some flames are meant to keep burning . . . may we always know the difference. All the best my friend.