Haiku 13

shorter workday -
I catch a brief shower
of silver rain
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Breidenthal Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 3:02 AM
Fascinating one.... sounds like a pleasant surpise! Always, Laura
Hicks Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 10:51 PM
It definitely was! It's one of those rare moments you see rain coming down on a sunny day ... the raindrops appear to glimmer.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Nice! See my response to your comment for tentative Dancer
Hicks Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Checking it out now...
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 7:28 PM
this is so pretty with the silver rain line.
Hicks Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 10:18 PM
On the first day of spring the rain looked AMAZING! It was very odd because the conditions were just to write to make rain so bright it almost blinds your eyes to start at it too long... one of those moments where you almost can't believe what you're seeing.
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