Haiku

a hot sultry day sunlight zenith in the sky shadows cooling worms 06/29/2021

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/25/2021 10:47:00 AM

Great imagery... We are abou6to say good bye to the hot summer days, and welcome the cold winter nights.. Well penned Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 11/25/2021 12:30:00 PM

Thanks for your positive comments and visit~ Warren

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/27/2021 9:53:00 PM

Woah wow a cool haiku for a hot heaty day. I love the word zenith. Kudos! ------<<<<<<<^^^^^>>>>>>>>~~~~~~>>>>>> Also plz do read and comment my newest poem here.

Warren Doll
Date: 8/10/2021 5:48:00 AM

Thanks so much for your comments and visit~ Warren

Joseph May

Date: 7/25/2021 7:20:00 AM

Very nicely penned Warren...

Warren Doll
Date: 8/6/2021 6:39:00 AM

Joseph, thank you for your comment and visit~ Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/19/2021 11:27:00 AM

Great imagery, Warren--in just a few words.

Warren Doll
Date: 7/24/2021 6:06:00 AM

Vijay, thanks for your visit and support~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2021 2:40:00 PM

warren the mail below is spam many of us have received them. we are hoping admin will deal with the problem xx

Warren Doll
Date: 7/10/2021 12:52:00 PM

Jan, I thought it was. Thanks for letting me know~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2021 1:56:00 PM

good one Warren we have something called worm charming here trying to emulate rain when the worms rise to the surface lol:) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 7/10/2021 12:50:00 PM

Hi Jan, worm charming so funny. I know the Robins watch the ground closely after a rain looking for the worms to eat. Thanks for your comments and visit. Hugs~ Warren xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/1/2021 5:24:00 PM

Great one Warren ! Well done :)

Warren Doll
Date: 7/3/2021 6:44:00 AM

Heidi, thanks so much for your comment and visit~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/1/2021 10:15:00 AM

Warren, your steamy haiku evokes the perfect image of summer. Terrific imagery!! Happy Thursday!!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/1/2021 10:53:00 AM

Mike, thanks for your great comment, Happy Thursday to you too~ Warren