Haiku

a hot sultry day
sunlight zenith in the sky
shadows cooling worms


06/29/2021

summersunhaiku

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Paghunda Zahid

September 25, 2021 at 10:47 AM

Great imagery... We are abou6to say good bye to the hot summer days, and welcome the cold winter nights.. Well penned Warren

Warren Doll

November 25, 2021 at 12:30 PM

Thanks for your positive comments and visit~ Warren

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

July 27, 2021 at 9:53 PM

Woah wow a cool haiku for a hot heaty day. I love the word zenith. Kudos! ------<<<<<<<^^^^^>>>>>>>>~~~~~~>>>>>> Also plz do read and comment my newest poem here.

Warren Doll

August 10, 2021 at 5:48 AM

Thanks so much for your comments and visit~ Warren

Joseph May

July 25, 2021 at 7:20 AM

Very nicely penned Warren...

Warren Doll

August 6, 2021 at 6:39 AM

Joseph, thank you for your comment and visit~ Warren

Vijay Pandit

July 19, 2021 at 11:27 AM

Great imagery, Warren--in just a few words.

Warren Doll

July 24, 2021 at 6:06 AM

Vijay, thanks for your visit and support~ Warren

Jan Allison

July 9, 2021 at 2:40 PM

warren the mail below is spam many of us have received them. we are hoping admin will deal with the problem xx

Warren Doll

July 10, 2021 at 12:52 PM

Jan, I thought it was. Thanks for letting me know~ Warren

Jan Allison

July 8, 2021 at 1:56 PM

good one Warren we have something called worm charming here trying to emulate rain when the worms rise to the surface lol:) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

July 10, 2021 at 12:50 PM

Hi Jan, worm charming so funny. I know the Robins watch the ground closely after a rain looking for the worms to eat. Thanks for your comments and visit. Hugs~ Warren xx