Haiku

stunning spectacle v formation in the sky ~ a flock of wild geese One Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Date written: 04/18/2021

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Linda Milgate

Date: 4/20/2021 9:25:00 PM

Nice to see some beautiful traditional Haiku in natural phenomena.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/21/2021 4:24:00 AM

Thank you, Linda:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/19/2021 4:50:00 PM

Hello Edward, wonderful... Well done. yes the geese do fly in a V formation. I watch fly in the sky honking as the fly by. Blessing my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/21/2021 10:24:00 AM

Hello Edward, Blessings to you .

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/21/2021 4:23:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene:-) Blessings to you, too!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/19/2021 5:16:00 AM

I see them in V formation--great imagery!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/19/2021 6:49:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/19/2021 2:58:00 AM

You've captured that very poignant moment in time. Great Haiku Edward, with you the best of luck, have a great day, dear friend

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/19/2021 6:48:00 AM

Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)