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cool air pitch black sky leaves whipped up by callous wind wing whistle dove coo 4/18/2021 Mourning Doves are known for their gentle cooing sounds. The air rushing through these special feathers makes them vibrate and create sound (kind of like a kazoo). The noise is called a wing whistle, and it's part of the Mourning Dove's natural alarm system. What does it mean when you see a mourning dove? In a nutshell ~ haiku is supposed to be an observation of a moment in nature without embellishment, no passing judgment, no use of fantasy or abstract concepts. It's basically two simple ideas with a 'turn' that is essential: it's almost like the punchline of a joke but haiku is not meant to be funny per se. 1. 5-7-5 is the max syllable count 2. NATURE is the subject 3. NO capitalization 4. NO title (if you must, use first word(s) of haiku) 5. NO punctuation unless for the turn 6. NO adjectives or adverbs 7. NO full sentences: It's a poem of few words with much left unsaid 8. MUST have a feeling of the present moment (NO past or future)

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Date: 5/1/2021 10:29:00 PM
Lovely little fleeting moment...those rare and swiftly moving instances that buoy the Spirit and enrich the Soul. Enchanting! My very best regards, Eve -- cheers! :) john
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Date: 4/22/2021 6:44:00 PM
Eve, Congrats on you win, you've captured Mourning doves in your poem but I still could do without theit early morning Cou Cou
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Date: 4/22/2021 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations for your win on the contest, you deserve it Eve. Hugs//Las
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Date: 4/22/2021 6:02:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/22/2021 9:20:00 AM
Excellent Eve, congrats. :)
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Date: 4/22/2021 8:37:00 AM
Lovely imagery with a sprinkling of alliteration, Eve. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/22/2021 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your write, picture and extra information. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 4/19/2021 3:59:00 PM
An excellent haiku..
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Date: 4/19/2021 4:59:00 AM
striking images eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/18/2021 10:29:00 PM
Lovely haiku though it reminds me of death.
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Date: 4/18/2021 8:44:00 PM
Eve, Their song greets my mornings. They seem to like the lucky sunflower's seed left in April. -Richard
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