Haiku

sun pours molten gold sky in throes of passion- the day dolls in black dress ~"Let's get creative with Haiku contest by Constance La France. ~03/18/21

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Constance La France

Date: 3/24/2021 3:22:00 PM

Abdul, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this wonderful non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2021 6:46:00 PM

very creative Abdul, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/24/2021 7:31:00 AM

Many thanks for your comment, Jan.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/22/2021 4:34:00 PM

Vivid imagery! Congrats on your win, Abdul! Blessings, Kim M

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/24/2021 7:30:00 AM

Thanks Kim for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2021 2:17:00 PM

very creative indeed! Congrats, Abdul.

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/24/2021 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2021 12:50:00 PM

- Congratulations on your second place in the contest, this one was creative ... lovely written, Abdul :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/24/2021 7:28:00 AM

Thanks a bunch.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/20/2021 9:07:00 AM

This is a lovely piece, Abdul. I suppose it is okay, but I'm not sure how far we can stray from traditional haiku and still call it "haiku." Oh well, most poetry forms get modified over the years, right?

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/20/2021 8:21:00 AM

Quite beautiful Abdul!

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/24/2021 7:28:00 AM

Thanks Kim, like always I appreciate your comment.