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Haiku

sun pours 
      molten gold
sky in throes of passion-
      the day dolls in
                  black dress



~"Let's get creative with Haiku
contest by Constance La France.
~03/18/21

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Jan Allison

March 22, 2021 at 6:46 PM

very creative Abdul, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 24, 2021 at 7:31 AM

Many thanks for your comment, Jan.

Kim Merryman

March 22, 2021 at 4:34 PM

Vivid imagery! Congrats on your win, Abdul! Blessings, Kim M

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 24, 2021 at 7:30 AM

Thanks Kim for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2021 at 2:17 PM

very creative indeed! Congrats, Abdul.

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 24, 2021 at 7:29 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 22, 2021 at 12:50 PM

- Congratulations on your second place in the contest, this one was creative ... lovely written, Abdul :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 24, 2021 at 7:28 AM

Thanks a bunch.

L Milton Hankins

March 20, 2021 at 9:07 AM

This is a lovely piece, Abdul. I suppose it is okay, but I'm not sure how far we can stray from traditional haiku and still call it "haiku." Oh well, most poetry forms get modified over the years, right?