Rasitha Ranasinghe Poet Haiku

Haiku

abandoned old pond 
bees hum to blooming lotus~
rising morning sun

Syllable count	5-7-5 
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Contest	: Any New Nature inspired Haiku Poetry Contest
Date	: 08 November 2020
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Received Bronze placement on Any New Nature inspired Haiku Poetry Contest
judged on 19th November 2020.

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Jan Allison November 20, 2020 at 4:33 PM what wonderful imagery, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Rasitha Ranasinghe November 21, 2020 at 6:26 PM Jan, Greatly appreciate your comment. Thank you. :) Rasitha

Anne-Lise Andresen November 19, 2020 at 3:51 PM - Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Rasitha :) - // Anne-Lise :) Rasitha Ranasinghe November 20, 2020 at 5:30 AM Anne-Lise, Thank you for your great comment. Appreciate it. :) Rasitha

Tania Kitchin November 19, 2020 at 1:52 PM Rasitha, congratulations on your bronze placement with your beautiful haiku! Rasitha Ranasinghe November 20, 2020 at 5:33 AM Tania, I feel great to have a placement in your contest. Appreciate it. :) Rasitha.

Newton Ranaweera November 10, 2020 at 6:00 PM This is an excellent haiku, Rasitha!! I like your use of imagery and alliterative sounds. You are already in winner in my list!! Rasitha Ranasinghe November 10, 2020 at 8:55 PM Dear Newton Arach, Thanks a lot for the very encouraging comment.