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abandoned old pond bees hum to blooming lotus~ rising morning sun Syllable count 5-7-5 http://www.howmanysyllables.com Contest : Any New Nature inspired Haiku Poetry Contest Date : 08 November 2020 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Received Bronze placement on Any New Nature inspired Haiku Poetry Contest judged on 19th November 2020.

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Date: 11/20/2020 4:33:00 PM
what wonderful imagery, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/21/2020 6:26:00 PM
Jan, Greatly appreciate your comment. Thank you. :) Rasitha
Date: 11/19/2020 3:51:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Rasitha :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2020 5:30:00 AM
Anne-Lise, Thank you for your great comment. Appreciate it. :) Rasitha
Date: 11/19/2020 1:52:00 PM
Rasitha, congratulations on your bronze placement with your beautiful haiku!
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/20/2020 5:33:00 AM
Tania, I feel great to have a placement in your contest. Appreciate it. :) Rasitha.
Date: 11/10/2020 6:00:00 PM
This is an excellent haiku, Rasitha!! I like your use of imagery and alliterative sounds. You are already in winner in my list!!
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/10/2020 8:55:00 PM
Dear Newton Arach, Thanks a lot for the very encouraging comment.