Haiku 12 - Fish Fry

light wind sweeps water
pushing up glittering waves
delighted fish jump
minnows leap and flash
dark lake water rolls and boils
big bass takes the bait
Copyright, October 3, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson
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Thirtyseven Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 7:33 AM
wonderful
Yvonne Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 9:58 PM
An excellent coupling of haiku. I love the twist with the bait.
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 8:02 PM
Wonderful imagery Faye and I love the very clever title. Hugs Jan xxx
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