Haiku 12

a lone jack-pine
carves a pliable sky--
the artist lingers


*See "About This Poem"

artnaturehaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

March 10, 2015 at 12:16 AM

The artist Mr. Pine? hey Jack. Lovely "carves a pliable sky--"...Love Heather>rajat

Michael Dom

December 19, 2013 at 3:08 AM

Hey, Heather, I feel this one."pliable sky"... like that.

Matthew Anish

September 16, 2013 at 7:48 PM

Intriguing poem here! Just who is the artist? Food for thought. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Jordan

August 5, 2013 at 9:37 PM

A very fine haiku. I really like the art part, that is, a sculptor (the tree) and the lingering artist... Jack

Charmaine Chircop

July 25, 2013 at 9:37 AM

I love the pliable sky Heather

Sean L Sanders

July 25, 2013 at 5:00 AM

This is very good I love this poem poet

Andrea Dietrich

July 24, 2013 at 3:31 PM

oh my gosh, this is exquisite!!! I rarely have the time to visit the new poems list but Utah is having Pioneer Day today so I had time to come and see my favorite poets on the list!