Haiku 12

a lone jack-pine carves a pliable sky-- the artist lingers *See "About This Poem"

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/10/2015 12:16:00 AM

The artist Mr. Pine? hey Jack. Lovely "carves a pliable sky--"...Love Heather>rajat

Michael Dom

Date: 12/19/2013 3:08:00 AM

Hey, Heather, I feel this one."pliable sky"... like that.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/16/2013 7:48:00 PM

Intriguing poem here! Just who is the artist? Food for thought. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Jordan

Date: 8/5/2013 9:37:00 PM

A very fine haiku. I really like the art part, that is, a sculptor (the tree) and the lingering artist... Jack

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/25/2013 9:37:00 AM

I love the pliable sky Heather

Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/25/2013 5:00:00 AM

This is very good I love this poem poet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2013 3:31:00 PM

oh my gosh, this is exquisite!!! I rarely have the time to visit the new poems list but Utah is having Pioneer Day today so I had time to come and see my favorite poets on the list!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/24/2013 6:34:00 AM

I can smell the pine trees, lovely Haiku.

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/23/2013 11:48:00 PM

Brush solidarity into the horizons and become one from within, as the eyes continue to explore meaning. What a touching little Haiku.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/23/2013 8:04:00 PM

So wonderfully done! Haiku's are my fav! Laura :)