Haiku 12

Join one another 
in a zone deeper than breath.  
Essential moment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 4:44 PM
more imagery with breath. It works very well with the essential moment.
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:13 PM
I took a writing class with a poet who emphasized literal breath. I enjoy it as a very soft action word. J
Squyres Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:46 PM
I remember those moments...they are indeed essential.
Jordan Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 6:39 PM
Yes, they are. Thanks for reading it and commenting. J
Chircop Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:27 PM
Just beautiful...Charma
Jordan Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Thank you for the nice comment. J
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