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Haiku 12

Join one another in a zone deeper than breath. Essential moment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/27/2013 4:44:00 PM
more imagery with breath. It works very well with the essential moment.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/27/2013 5:13:00 PM
I took a writing class with a poet who emphasized literal breath. I enjoy it as a very soft action word. J
Date: 2/19/2013 4:46:00 PM
I remember those moments...they are indeed essential.
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Date: 2/19/2013 6:39:00 PM
Yes, they are. Thanks for reading it and commenting. J
Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 PM
Just beautiful...Charma
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Date: 2/17/2013 8:35:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment. J

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