Haiku

in muted stillness nature calmly takes a breath fading green meadows

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2020 10:35:00 AM

wow, super well done, Belden. Belated Congrats

Belden Raiser
Date: 12/29/2020 3:00:00 PM

Hey Andrea, thanks so much!

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/25/2020 2:53:00 AM

Congrats! Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Belden Raiser
Date: 12/29/2020 2:59:00 PM

Thanks Beata.

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/23/2020 3:59:00 AM

Congratulations, Belden, on your win for this beautiful haiku!!

Belden Raiser
Date: 12/23/2020 1:33:00 PM

Thank you Newton.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/17/2020 5:57:00 PM

Another beauty. So few words, yet true impact. So well done. Brian

Belden Raiser
Date: 12/17/2020 6:52:00 PM

Hi Brian, you are so kind. Cheers, Belden.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/29/2020 9:16:00 AM

Lovely, Belden ~

Belden Raiser
Date: 10/29/2020 1:53:00 PM

Thanks so much, Line.

Robert Kinard

Date: 10/24/2020 10:03:00 AM

I have been trying to write a Haiku you make it look easy enough. I am 62 and have long enjoyed the Quiet and stillness of nature.

Belden Raiser
Date: 10/26/2020 4:32:00 PM

Hey Robert, glad you enjoyed it!