Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Haiku 1-2-3 Or 3-2-1 Series

whippoorwill
trills a
song

larks
in trees
sing along

croaking frogs
join the
throng

then
crickets
chirp with ease

symphony
on the
breeze

Sept. 27. 2018 
for the Haiku 1-2-3 Or 3-2-1 Poetry Contest of charles messina

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P.S. Awtry October 22, 2018 at 1:12 AM very lovely :)

Eve Roper October 10, 2018 at 8:27 PM Great string of Haiku, Andrea, congratulations on your win. <3

Augustus Black October 10, 2018 at 6:45 AM Super Haikus Andrea... Congratulation for the win.

Joanna Daniel October 9, 2018 at 10:22 PM This is a wonderful winner, Andrea:)

Charles Messina October 9, 2018 at 6:20 PM I love this one Andrea, great take on this new form. Congratulations on your win in my contest and thank you for entering. Hugs Charlie :)

Jan Allison October 9, 2018 at 5:19 PM absolutely gorgeous Andrea such lovely imagery which appeals to my senses:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier October 9, 2018 at 2:42 PM Beautiful harmony, Andrea. Lovely poem. Congrats on your top win.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2018 at 11:34 AM - Congratulations on your great haiku, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll October 9, 2018 at 9:57 AM Very creative haiku, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. ~Warren

Connie Marcum Wong September 28, 2018 at 7:04 AM This is brilliant Andrea. I never got past creating even one. It is almost 2am and I have been having so many problems with the ads blocking by view I can't read the poems. I hope they can fix it soon. I know this will be high on the winner's list! : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 28, 2018 at 6:36 AM I love it. You're playing my favourite song Andrea. I SO miss the sound of the whippoorwill. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Rhona Mcferran September 27, 2018 at 9:15 PM This is brilliant- Love the flow of this, and can practically hear it in my head! ;) Wonderfully penned!

Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2018 at 7:32 PM Andrea, your poems are like reading song lyrics! I think you could make a fortune in the music industry, my dear. Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2018 at 8:17 PM that was so nice of you to say, Caren. I've always felt that what I lack in imaginative imagery i make up for with meter!

Agnes Krampe September 27, 2018 at 5:31 PM This is beautiful. I love short poems that are distilled to the essentials.

Vijay Pandit September 27, 2018 at 5:22 PM Excellent haiku imagery Andrea..best for a win in the contest.

Ilene Bauer September 27, 2018 at 4:55 PM this is lovely, andrea! best of luck in the contest...

Matthew Anish September 27, 2018 at 4:38 PM Stimulating work here. New type of short poem is good to see! The rhymes are clever. In Brooklyn - where I went for a reading last night - we devised the 9 1 1 poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Nette Onclaud September 27, 2018 at 4:22 PM lilting ku seasoned with enchanting word-pictures, andie...thanks for reading me; i edited my work!...huggs

Paul Callus September 27, 2018 at 4:14 PM Lovely and capably executed, Andrea. I call these trimmed or hacked haiku. Hope to see you on the podium:) Regards // paul

Rico Leffanta September 27, 2018 at 3:50 PM Well done! Bonne chance! Aloha! Rico