Haiku 1-2-3

snow
drifts down
from heaven

ice
frozen
in glaciers

melts
into
the ocean

sun
calls back
to vapor

clouds
inflate
-- repeating

9.18.18
Contest: Haiku 1-2-3 or 3-2-1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Great string of Haiku, Jeese, congratulations on your win. <3
Messina Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Excellent poetry Jesse, I really enjoyed this string of new form haiku. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Great string of haiku Jesse. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Well done, Jesse. Congrats on your top win.
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 11:41 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Beautifully composed painting a lovely winter scene. : )
Gauthier Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Very clever, Jesse.
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