Haiku 12-28-16

As to sleep I go

In eternity I be

Mind and Soul combine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Michaels Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 5:05 AM
I love a good Haiku and this, my friend, is definitely up there. Amazing how so few, but oh-so-carefully selected, words can capture the essence of the eternal questions Man posits. If you feel so inclined, I humbly invite you to read my latest "Reflections..." postings as I feel we share a Haiku spirit. Have a great day. Regards, John.
Green Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 5:27 PM
Very cool. This felt good to read.
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