Haiku

morning sunlight stream forest full of swirling mist prism colors shining

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2020 1:05:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/26/2020 2:27:00 PM

Andrea, thanks so much. I enjoyed your haiku very much and see that you were also a winner. Best Wishes~ Warren

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/23/2020 6:13:00 PM

I love imagery which reflects the beauty of a forest. "Prism colours" is such a soothing reference. Congratulations on your win Warren :)

Warren Doll
Date: 5/25/2020 12:20:00 PM

Aditi, I too have always enjoyed the beauty of the forest. Thanks for your positive comments~ Warren.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2020 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Warren! Lovely imagery in this haiku! Blessings xxoo

Warren Doll
Date: 5/25/2020 12:16:00 PM

Hi Connie, it's always good to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comments and support. Peace~ Warren

Eve Roper

Date: 5/22/2020 8:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Warren . Eve

Warren Doll
Date: 5/25/2020 12:13:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much. Sending warmest wishes.~ Warren

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/22/2020 7:37:00 PM

Lovely Haiku. Thank you for entering and happy to see your high placement. Congrats with love and prayers and blessings, Gina

Warren Doll
Date: 5/25/2020 12:10:00 PM

Gina, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm honored to receive a placement in the 10. All the best~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/6/2020 4:41:00 PM

That swirling mist would be beautiful! Funny that movies depict nature with haunting music when it is so wondrous.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/8/2020 3:18:00 PM

Kim, I agree, ~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/29/2020 4:56:00 PM

I agree with Andrea.;0)

Warren Doll
Date: 5/2/2020 2:58:00 PM

Thanks for your positive comment and visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2020 2:34:00 PM

a very pretty picture, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2020 6:13:00 PM

Glad that you liked it, Andrea. Warmest Wishes~ Warren.

Charles Messina

Date: 3/7/2020 8:37:00 PM

Fantastic imagery, Warren. Superb haiku my friend. Have a blessed Sunday. All the best...Charlie

Warren Doll
Date: 3/9/2020 6:41:00 PM

Charlie, sorry for the tardy response. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and visit~ Warren.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2020 2:30:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 2/20/2020 11:32:00 AM

Thanks so much and for your visit, Anne-Lise. I'm sending a bunch of big warm hugs your way~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/17/2020 9:19:00 AM

Your beautiful haiku makes it so easy for me to see the wonder of nature. So very calming! Happy Monday !!

Warren Doll
Date: 2/17/2020 9:40:00 AM

Mike , thanks for your positive comments and visit. A Happy Monday to you too~ Warren

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/16/2020 8:42:00 PM

Warren, Glad to find this Haiku on a solemn Sunday eve. -Richard

Warren Doll
Date: 2/17/2020 9:37:00 AM

Richard, I'm glad that you liked it. Best Wishes~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/14/2020 3:51:00 AM

A very lovely haiku Warren. Happy Valentine's Day my friend. xxoo

Warren Doll
Date: 2/14/2020 2:28:00 PM

Thanks for your positive comment ,Connie. A Happy Valentine's Day to you too. Warmest Wishes xxoo~ Warren

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2020 11:27:00 AM

Oh so beautiful to see today! Well written :)

Warren Doll
Date: 2/14/2020 2:31:00 PM

Hi Heidi, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for your visit. ~ Warren

Eve Roper

Date: 2/10/2020 4:23:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Warren. TI love the colors reflected by the rain and sun. A rainbow blessing. hank you for the congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve

Warren Doll
Date: 2/11/2020 1:28:00 PM

Eve, I am so glad that you liked it and thanks for your beautiful comments and visit. You deserved POTD. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2020 9:10:00 AM

If I didn’t read this one it would have been a mist opportunity that I would have missed. ;0) Sorry I couldn’t resist. Have a great day Warren, thanks as well for your visit.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/8/2020 6:54:00 PM

Richard, Ha! Ha! and thanks for your visit. Glad that you enjoyed it. Your welcome.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/5/2020 11:53:00 AM

Exquisite imagery Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 2/5/2020 3:20:00 PM

I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks so much for your visit , Jan. Hugs~ Warren

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/2/2020 3:38:00 PM

Ah... sounds wonderful.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/3/2020 12:50:00 PM

Line, I'm glad that you liked it, Warmest Wishes ~Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/2/2020 3:22:00 PM

Beautiful capture of the nature's art, Warren--sun rays refracting colors.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/3/2020 12:48:00 PM

Vijay, thanks for your comments and visit. I appreciate your critique~ Warren