Haiku

morning sunlight stream
forest full of swirling mist
prism colors shining
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 1:05 PM
Congrats for your win, Warren.
Doll Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Andrea, thanks so much. I enjoyed your haiku very much and see that you were also a winner. Best Wishes~ Warren
Mishra Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:13 PM
I love imagery which reflects the beauty of a forest. "Prism colours" is such a soothing reference. Congratulations on your win Warren :)
Doll Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Aditi, I too have always enjoyed the beauty of the forest. Thanks for your positive comments~ Warren.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your win Warren! Lovely imagery in this haiku! Blessings xxoo
Doll Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Hi Connie, it's always good to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comments and support. Peace~ Warren
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 8:06 PM
Congratulations on your win, Warren . Eve
Doll Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Eve, thank you so much. Sending warmest wishes.~ Warren
Mcintosh Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 7:37 PM
Lovely Haiku. Thank you for entering and happy to see your high placement. Congrats with love and prayers and blessings, Gina
Doll Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Gina, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm honored to receive a placement in the 10. All the best~ Warren
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 4:41 PM
That swirling mist would be beautiful! Funny that movies depict nature with haunting music when it is so wondrous.
Doll Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Kim, I agree, ~ Warren
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 4:56 PM
I agree with Andrea.;0)
Doll Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Thanks for your positive comment and visit.
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 2:34 PM
a very pretty picture, Warren.
Doll Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 6:13 PM
Glad that you liked it, Andrea. Warmest Wishes~ Warren.
Messina Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Fantastic imagery, Warren. Superb haiku my friend. Have a blessed Sunday. All the best...Charlie
Doll Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Charlie, sorry for the tardy response. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and visit~ Warren.
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February 18, 2020 at 2:30 PM
- Beautiful written, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Doll Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Thanks so much and for your visit, Anne-Lise. I'm sending a bunch of big warm hugs your way~ Warren
Gentile Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Your beautiful haiku makes it so easy for me to see the wonder of nature. So very calming! Happy Monday !!
Doll Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:40 AM
Mike , thanks for your positive comments and visit. A Happy Monday to you too~ Warren
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February 16, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Warren, Glad to find this Haiku on a solemn Sunday eve. -Richard
Doll Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Richard, I'm glad that you liked it. Best Wishes~ Warren
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 3:51 AM
A very lovely haiku Warren. Happy Valentine's Day my friend. xxoo
Doll Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Thanks for your positive comment ,Connie. A Happy Valentine's Day to you too. Warmest Wishes xxoo~ Warren
Sands Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Oh so beautiful to see today! Well written :)
Doll Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Hi Heidi, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for your visit. ~ Warren
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Warren. TI love the colors reflected by the rain and sun. A rainbow blessing. hank you for the congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Doll Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Eve, I am so glad that you liked it and thanks for your beautiful comments and visit. You deserved POTD. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Lamoureux Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:10 AM
If I didn’t read this one it would have been a mist opportunity that I would have missed. ;0) Sorry I couldn’t resist. Have a great day Warren, thanks as well for your visit.
Doll Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 6:54 PM
Richard, Ha! Ha! and thanks for your visit. Glad that you enjoyed it. Your welcome.
Allison Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Exquisite imagery Warren:-) hugs Jan xx
Doll Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 3:20 PM
I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks so much for your visit , Jan. Hugs~ Warren
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Ah... sounds wonderful.
Doll Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Line, I'm glad that you liked it, Warmest Wishes ~Warren
Pandit Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Beautiful capture of the nature's art, Warren--sun rays refracting colors.
Doll Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 12:48 PM
Vijay, thanks for your comments and visit. I appreciate your critique~ Warren
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