Haiku 12-2-2016

Haiku 12/2/2016


December daybreak
dim sun searching for a smile
cold wind biting cheeks


John G. Lawless
12/2/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 2, 2016 at 9:45 AM
This is beautiful, a chilled poem with a warm feel.
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December 2, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful, John. I love the whole thing, but oh that middle line.... : )
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December 2, 2016 at 7:00 PM
Thanks Christina, on those cold, clear December days the sun seems to be lonely.
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December 2, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Wonderful haiku - the imagery is simply perfect for this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx7
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December 2, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Thanks Jan, I love the seasons as they do so reflect our moods.
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