Haiku 11

a train whistles
on a misty summer night...
fog horn blows

8/31/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Anish Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 2:58 PM
This a a very sweet little poem! Keepit up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Situation Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 7:13 AM
A train trip by the ocean. Nice.
Alvez Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Ah! Lovely! Cynthia
Sweetheart Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 7:40 AM
an eerie sound in a lovely setting Phyl .. nicely done luv .. hope all is well with u .. am still dealing with painful arthritis in both hands so trying to rise above it .. happy week ..
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 1:06 PM
love the interplay of words and expressions, phyl... delighted!...huggs
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September 1, 2012 at 8:19 PM
Phyllis, love your haiku... trains are annoying here in Texas... good night;.;;pd
Wellington Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 7:52 PM
Thanks for sharing this lovely Haiku, Phyllis. Beautiful! Appreciate your visit and comments, neighbor. One love. Joy Wells
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August 31, 2012 at 4:23 PM
Liked best No. 10 - but this was also good. You're good with haiku poems Phyllis. Have a lovely weekend. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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August 31, 2012 at 4:22 PM
you kept it going.. nice job. I really like #10 the best though, preference I guess... :) Best regards, Cindy
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