Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Haiku

Haiku 11 20 2014

pale rats moving south
                                 an waft of charred cadavers
                                       soldiers drink cider












© Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 20 November 2014  haiku/war

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Dorian Petersen Potter November 19, 2014 at 6:33 PM This one is so deep and stark in subject, my dear friend Rajat! You penned this senryu so well> A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 19, 2014 at 11:43 PM Love and Hugs D XXXXX RAJAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 19, 2014 at 5:35 PM This haiku cuts straight to the core. Well done, Rajat! Hugs, Rhonda Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 19, 2014 at 11:51 PM Blackest side of war is that it deifies killers. So horrific. Love Rhonda for visiting. Hugs! ...RAJAT

David Meade November 19, 2014 at 1:57 PM ravenous of war -- both upon the heart and land!! nicely done, great contrast. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 19, 2014 at 11:52 PM Thank you David. Love XXXXX RAJAT

Sara Kendrick November 19, 2014 at 1:25 PM Tough soldiers..Enjoyed reading your Senryu like work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 19, 2014 at 11:54 PM Your poems are great Sara. I have enjoyed them, honestly. Love. Best wishes XXXXX RAJAT