Haiku 11 20 2014

pale rats moving south an waft of charred cadavers soldiers drink cider © Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 20 November 2014 haiku/war

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Date: 11/19/2014 6:33:00 PM

This one is so deep and stark in subject, my dear friend Rajat! You penned this senryu so well> A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/19/2014 11:43:00 PM

Love and Hugs D XXXXX RAJAT

Date: 11/19/2014 5:35:00 PM

This haiku cuts straight to the core. Well done, Rajat! Hugs, Rhonda

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/19/2014 11:51:00 PM

Blackest side of war is that it deifies killers. So horrific. Love Rhonda for visiting. Hugs! ...RAJAT

Date: 11/19/2014 1:57:00 PM

ravenous of war -- both upon the heart and land!! nicely done, great contrast.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/19/2014 11:52:00 PM

Thank you David. Love XXXXX RAJAT

Date: 11/19/2014 1:25:00 PM

Tough soldiers..Enjoyed reading your Senryu like work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/19/2014 11:54:00 PM

Your poems are great Sara. I have enjoyed them, honestly. Love. Best wishes XXXXX RAJAT