Haiku

Hawaiian shoreline
what ancient secrets you hold
volcanic ashes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 29, 2008 at 4:38 PM
Interesting imagery forward your thoughts in this concise poem. I like the contrast between your first and last lines. Keep on writing. Best wishes. Karen
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July 29, 2008 at 10:37 AM
I've never been there, but I understand its beauty is quite magical. Wonderful haiku. Love, Shar
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