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Hawaiian shoreline what ancient secrets you hold volcanic ashes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/29/2008 4:38:00 PM
Interesting imagery forward your thoughts in this concise poem. I like the contrast between your first and last lines. Keep on writing. Best wishes. Karen
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Date: 7/29/2008 10:37:00 AM
I've never been there, but I understand its beauty is quite magical. Wonderful haiku. Love, Shar
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