Haiku 111

it is November
but the air forgets that as
it dances spring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 12:48 PM
this are confusing times indeed for nature ~ congrats on your win, LJ
Agustin Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 10:35 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Carber Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations on your win ~ Mala
Carber Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Thanks, Mala!
Canerdy Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 4:00 PM
well-done, L.J.! Janice
Carber Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 5:11 PM
this is FANTASTIC!!!
Carber Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Ashley Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Beautifully said, L. J. Could be Indian summer.. which is amazing when we have a day like that in Southern New England. Your haiku brings me to the warmth of the sun. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Carber Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Susan!
Brewer Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Each month is entitled to remember its youth. Beautifully, briefly expressed sentiment, Len.
Carber Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Ta, Geoff [sorry for the delay]
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Beautiful......I think I love Fall more than Spring...well at least in a different way. Best, SuZ
Carber Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Me too! Thanks Suz!
Pandit Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 2:18 PM
True--it's been unusually warm.
Carber Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Thanks Vijay
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