Haiku 111

it is November but the air forgets that as it dances spring

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2021 12:48:00 PM

this are confusing times indeed for nature ~ congrats on your win, LJ

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/3/2021 10:35:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

L. J. Carber
Date: 3/5/2021 7:10:00 AM

Thank you, Beata!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/3/2021 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ~ Mala

L. J. Carber
Date: 3/5/2021 7:10:00 AM

Thanks, Mala!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/25/2020 4:00:00 PM

well-done, L.J.! Janice

L. J. Carber
Date: 11/26/2020 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Janice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2020 5:11:00 PM

this is FANTASTIC!!!

L. J. Carber
Date: 11/23/2020 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/20/2020 5:48:00 PM

Beautifully said, L. J. Could be Indian summer.. which is amazing when we have a day like that in Southern New England. Your haiku brings me to the warmth of the sun. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

L. J. Carber
Date: 11/23/2020 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Susan!

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 11/15/2020 2:15:00 PM

Each month is entitled to remember its youth. Beautifully, briefly expressed sentiment, Len.

L. J. Carber
Date: 11/23/2020 8:51:00 AM

Ta, Geoff [sorry for the delay]

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/15/2020 10:52:00 AM

Beautiful......I think I love Fall more than Spring...well at least in a different way. Best, SuZ

L. J. Carber
Date: 11/23/2020 8:51:00 AM

Me too! Thanks Suz!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/12/2020 2:18:00 PM

True--it's been unusually warm.

L. J. Carber
Date: 11/23/2020 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Vijay