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Haiku 10 - Slow Snail

snail climbing a hill
sees flourishing apple tree ...
will find it next year


One Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Date written: 04/19/2021

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Paghunda Zahid

May 3, 2021 at 6:48 PM

Hahaha... A great Haiku

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

April 27, 2021 at 6:43 PM

"Will find it next year" Brilliant! You're a haiku master.

Beryl Edmonds

April 23, 2021 at 4:34 AM

Never thought of a snails journey to find food before, what a tedious chore. A really good Haiku Victor... Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

April 21, 2021 at 7:30 AM

Shame poor snail, he will die of hunger till next year. a great Haiku though. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Kim Rodrigues

April 20, 2021 at 3:53 AM

Patience in the way of a snail.

Judy Ball

April 19, 2021 at 10:20 PM

Love this Victor. I like snails actually. Such quiet, harmless little creatures. Nice job and love the pic. God Bless, JB

Harry Horsman

April 19, 2021 at 7:03 PM

Slow road to Apple. Great haiku Victor

Silent One

April 19, 2021 at 1:40 PM

Now this is s real haiku...nice one victor

Tania Kitchin

April 19, 2021 at 12:20 PM

A cute one Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 19, 2021 at 10:50 AM

Your charming haiku captures the interest and imagination, Victor. It also has humor. Best wishes for the contest. :D

Sara Kendrick

April 19, 2021 at 7:02 AM

At least he keeps on tugging. LOL..I think he will eat his way up the hill, arrive late and decide to go back down. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara