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Haiku 10 - Kiss

where is the rain -- my
heart is parched for the moisture 
of your love, your kiss

Copyright © David Meade | Year Posted 2014

desirekisslovehaiku

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March 18, 2015 at 9:30 AM

I read longing here, David. Not just a simple kiss...

March 18, 2015 at 1:49 PM

Longing indeed! Much love is always needed even after 30 years of marriage!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 4, 2015 at 7:35 AM

mmmmmn!!!! rain and kiss! so sultry! but romantic! wow!

February 26, 2015 at 8:10 AM

Hmmm very romantic, David! Eileen would love this one!! Have a nice day. // paul

January 15, 2015 at 9:28 AM

This is a beautifully penned Haiku David. Truly enjoyed. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia

December 30, 2014 at 7:41 AM

Ahh sweet and romantic desires, well said! :)

November 2, 2014 at 8:20 AM

Very soft and romantic kiss, beautifully done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

October 31, 2014 at 5:50 PM

Ahh!! Romantic...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

October 30, 2014 at 12:46 PM

Among all your haiku.. This one is my favorite.. It is so romantic ^^

October 31, 2014 at 1:43 PM

Thank-you Doris, may we always find love and kisses! All the best.

Andrea Dietrich

October 29, 2014 at 12:01 AM

oh, yes, a rain of kisses watched for!! Very clever.

October 29, 2014 at 9:00 PM

we all need a little lovin from the ones we hold dear. All the best.

Dorian Petersen Potter

October 27, 2014 at 2:55 AM

Love it Dave! So sweet and romantic! :) enjoyed it! Love and light! xxxx D.

October 28, 2014 at 9:54 PM

D, thank-you for taking time to read my poem. I have been exploring your writings and enjoying my time. Love and light always!

October 26, 2014 at 8:08 PM

oh how romantic a haiku! hugs jan xx

October 28, 2014 at 9:54 PM

Thanks girlfriend, your the best. Till next time.

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