Haiku 10

Then we are in flames,
strung like pearls on a silk thread.
Wrestling in the night.

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Heather Ober

March 6, 2013 at 7:51 AM

Wow, the imagery here is outstanding!! This is such a unique haiku - I love it. (And thank you for all of your kind comments! They are always appreciated!)

Jack Jordan

March 6, 2013 at 8:39 AM

Thanks for your comment. I enjoy haiku, especially the compression and abstraction. My comments on your writing are well-deserved. Jack

Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2013 at 4:46 PM

I see you used wrestling in the night again. this one I love the middle line!!

Jack Jordan

February 27, 2013 at 5:10 PM

I used the repeat because they seemed to relate to each other quite well. I probably should have made it a double as I did on 17. I just didn't think to do so. J