Haiku

tide
departs
sea glass shines



123 or 321 modified form haiku for contest. 9/26/2018

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Deb Radke

December 3, 2018 at 7:11 PM

This is a wonderful haiku. Precisely and beautifully describing a phenomena of oceans and the great lakes. Best wishes, Warren.

Warren Doll

December 6, 2018 at 9:03 AM

Hi deb, your positive comments and support are always greatly appreciated. ~Warm wished~ Warren

Jean Bush

November 8, 2018 at 12:42 PM

Flowing perfectly.

Warren Doll

November 8, 2018 at 6:03 PM

Thanks for your clever comment, Jean. Warm wishes~ Warren

Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

October 24, 2018 at 7:03 PM

touching

Warren Doll

October 27, 2018 at 9:04 AM

Thanks very much, Kaa Na. I'm glad that you liked it ~Warren

Sara Kendrick

October 22, 2018 at 1:52 PM

The quiet of your Haiku speaks in detail. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Warren Doll

October 22, 2018 at 3:44 PM

Thanks for your kind comments and for your visit, Sara. ~Warren

Paul Marc

October 18, 2018 at 1:36 PM

Wonderful :)

Warren Doll

October 18, 2018 at 3:04 PM

Thanks and I'm glad you liked it, P.M.

Kim Rodrigues

October 17, 2018 at 10:08 PM

Lovely image, Warren!

Warren Doll

October 18, 2018 at 9:08 AM

Thanks for your positive comment and visit, Kim.

Pandita Sietesantos

October 16, 2018 at 9:39 AM

Such a beautiful haiku that glitters! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll

October 16, 2018 at 11:59 AM

Hi Pandita, always great to hear from you. Thanks for your comments and congratulations. Hugs~Warren

Silent One

October 15, 2018 at 5:57 AM

Nice one Warren..

Warren Doll

October 16, 2018 at 11:55 AM

Thanks for breaking you silence to give me a well appreciated comment.~Warren

Agnes Krampe

October 14, 2018 at 5:12 PM

Lovely image. Congrats!

Warren Doll

October 16, 2018 at 11:52 AM

Thanks so much for your positive comments.~Warren

Harry Horsman

October 12, 2018 at 4:01 PM

Lovely poetry, so much in such a tiny poem..

Warren Doll

October 13, 2018 at 8:12 AM

Harry, Thanks for your positive comments and support, Warren

Mike Gentile

October 11, 2018 at 12:46 PM

Congratulations on breaking the top ten in Best New Poems Warren!

Warren Doll

October 11, 2018 at 12:55 PM

Hi Mike, Thanks for letting me know. I see your poem is also within the top 15 . Congrats to you too. Warren

Eve Roper

October 10, 2018 at 9:14 PM

Warren, congratulations on your win. <3

Warren Doll

October 11, 2018 at 8:36 AM

Thanks so much , Eve,

Barbara Aquila

October 10, 2018 at 2:49 PM

Cograts! Well deserved.

Warren Doll

October 11, 2018 at 8:34 AM

Hi Barbara, Thanks so much. Your support is greatly appreciated.

Robertina B.

October 9, 2018 at 8:34 PM

Such a lovely haiku, Warren.. Fantastic imagery.. Congratulations on your win!! Many blessings, my friend..

Warren Doll

October 10, 2018 at 10:53 AM

My friend, Robertina, it's always great hearing from you. Thanks so much. ~Warren

Jan Allison

October 9, 2018 at 4:15 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

October 10, 2018 at 10:49 AM

Hi Jan, thanks for your congratulations and your support. ~Warren

Andrea Dietrich

October 9, 2018 at 3:21 PM

Beautiful!

Warren Doll

October 10, 2018 at 10:47 AM

Thanks so much , Andrea. I'm glad that you liked it. ~Warren

Tom Cunningham

October 9, 2018 at 1:09 PM

Back to wish you congratulations Warren. Tom.

Warren Doll

October 10, 2018 at 10:42 AM

Tom, thanks for your congratulations and your support. ~Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 9, 2018 at 11:49 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

October 10, 2018 at 10:40 AM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise. Great to hear from you again. A big hug coming your way. ~Warren

Line Gauthier

October 9, 2018 at 11:44 AM

Congrats on your top win, Warren. Love your image of sea glass.

Warren Doll

October 10, 2018 at 10:37 AM

Line, I am so glad that you liked it. Thanks for visiting. ~Warren

Charles Messina

October 9, 2018 at 10:13 AM

Warren, your imagery is awesome. Great work my friend. Congratulations on your win and thanks for trying this new form and entering my contest. All the best...Charlie

Warren Doll

October 10, 2018 at 10:34 AM

Charlie, Thanks so much for your kind compliments. I enjoyed your contest . With all of the great talent in here, a win is truly a honor. Best regards, Warren

Vladislav Raven

October 8, 2018 at 4:56 PM

Hi Warren, an excellent Haiku, I wonder how you all encompass your vision in so few words. Good luck in the contest. This little gem shall join the many in my faves. have a wonderful end to your Monday....Mike.

Warren Doll

October 9, 2018 at 9:34 AM

Hi Mike, Thanks for your positive comments. I'm honored that you are adding it to your faves. ~Warren

Susan Ashley

October 6, 2018 at 9:07 PM

Ohh, I adore the lovely vibe of your haiku, Warren. Stunning imagery. Your poem, like the sea glass, shines beautifully! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Warren Doll

October 9, 2018 at 9:17 AM

Hi Susan, thanks for your positive comments and support. It's always great to hear from you. Warm wishes~Warren