Haiku

tide departs sea glass shines 123 or 321 modified form haiku for contest. 9/26/2018

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Deb Radke

Date: 12/3/2018 7:11:00 PM

This is a wonderful haiku. Precisely and beautifully describing a phenomena of oceans and the great lakes. Best wishes, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 12/6/2018 9:03:00 AM

Hi deb, your positive comments and support are always greatly appreciated. ~Warm wished~ Warren

Jean Bush

Date: 11/8/2018 12:42:00 PM

Flowing perfectly.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/8/2018 6:03:00 PM

Thanks for your clever comment, Jean. Warm wishes~ Warren

Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

Date: 10/24/2018 7:03:00 PM

touching

Warren Doll
Date: 10/27/2018 9:04:00 AM

Thanks very much, Kaa Na. I'm glad that you liked it ~Warren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2018 1:52:00 PM

The quiet of your Haiku speaks in detail. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 10/22/2018 3:44:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comments and for your visit, Sara. ~Warren

P.M. Richter

Date: 10/18/2018 1:36:00 PM

Wonderful :)

Warren Doll
Date: 10/18/2018 3:04:00 PM

Thanks and I'm glad you liked it, P.M.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/17/2018 10:08:00 PM

Lovely image, Warren!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/18/2018 9:08:00 AM

Thanks for your positive comment and visit, Kim.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/16/2018 9:39:00 AM

Such a beautiful haiku that glitters! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll
Date: 10/16/2018 11:59:00 AM

Hi Pandita, always great to hear from you. Thanks for your comments and congratulations. Hugs~Warren

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2018 5:57:00 AM

Nice one Warren..

Warren Doll
Date: 10/16/2018 11:55:00 AM

Thanks for breaking you silence to give me a well appreciated comment.~Warren

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/14/2018 5:12:00 PM

Lovely image. Congrats!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/16/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thanks so much for your positive comments.~Warren

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/12/2018 4:01:00 PM

Lovely poetry, so much in such a tiny poem..

Warren Doll
Date: 10/13/2018 8:12:00 AM

Harry, Thanks for your positive comments and support, Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/11/2018 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on breaking the top ten in Best New Poems Warren!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/11/2018 12:55:00 PM

Hi Mike, Thanks for letting me know. I see your poem is also within the top 15 . Congrats to you too. Warren

Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2018 9:14:00 PM

Warren, congratulations on your win. <3

Warren Doll
Date: 10/11/2018 8:36:00 AM

Thanks so much , Eve,

Barbara Aquila

Date: 10/10/2018 2:49:00 PM

Cograts! Well deserved.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/11/2018 8:34:00 AM

Hi Barbara, Thanks so much. Your support is greatly appreciated.

Robertina B.

Date: 10/9/2018 8:34:00 PM

Such a lovely haiku, Warren.. Fantastic imagery.. Congratulations on your win!! Many blessings, my friend..

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 10:53:00 AM

My friend, Robertina, it's always great hearing from you. Thanks so much. ~Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2018 4:15:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 10:49:00 AM

Hi Jan, thanks for your congratulations and your support. ~Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2018 3:21:00 PM

Beautiful!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 10:47:00 AM

Thanks so much , Andrea. I'm glad that you liked it. ~Warren

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/9/2018 1:09:00 PM

Back to wish you congratulations Warren. Tom.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 10:42:00 AM

Tom, thanks for your congratulations and your support. ~Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2018 11:49:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 10:40:00 AM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise. Great to hear from you again. A big hug coming your way. ~Warren

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/9/2018 11:44:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Warren. Love your image of sea glass.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 10:37:00 AM

Line, I am so glad that you liked it. Thanks for visiting. ~Warren

Charles Messina

Date: 10/9/2018 10:13:00 AM

Warren, your imagery is awesome. Great work my friend. Congratulations on your win and thanks for trying this new form and entering my contest. All the best...Charlie

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 10:34:00 AM

Charlie, Thanks so much for your kind compliments. I enjoyed your contest . With all of the great talent in here, a win is truly a honor. Best regards, Warren

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/8/2018 4:56:00 PM

Hi Warren, an excellent Haiku, I wonder how you all encompass your vision in so few words. Good luck in the contest. This little gem shall join the many in my faves. have a wonderful end to your Monday....Mike.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/9/2018 9:34:00 AM

Hi Mike, Thanks for your positive comments. I'm honored that you are adding it to your faves. ~Warren

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/6/2018 9:07:00 PM

Ohh, I adore the lovely vibe of your haiku, Warren. Stunning imagery. Your poem, like the sea glass, shines beautifully! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Warren Doll
Date: 10/9/2018 9:17:00 AM

Hi Susan, thanks for your positive comments and support. It's always great to hear from you. Warm wishes~Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2018 5:02:00 PM

so few words say so much, a lovely haiku Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 10/6/2018 3:52:00 PM

Hi Jan, I'm so glad that you liked it. ~Warren:)