Haiku 104

Haiku 104 
	
	
	her eyes 
	are open yet don’t see 
	night arrives
	
	
	
	
        12.11.2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 3:22 PM
ahhhh, ME LIKES
Jordan Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Thanks you... Jack
Sergi Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Another great Haiku Jack
Guzzi Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 7:36 PM
ut oh dead broad? ;) Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 10:52 AM
- Well done Haiku 104, Jack! .......... Who is Karen .... (?) .... Here everything must be told ... lol... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:04 PM
A friend who committed suicide earlier this week... Jack
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