Haiku

we take each season as it comes we have no choice... summer holidays Of the present, inspired by the present, invoked by Tom Cunningham. Quote, "Indeed a true Japan haiku must follow those rules to say yes it is a haiku, but like most things people move away and bend the rules and reshape it, one thing I've noticed is many do not follow the ( in the moment) theme where its like a photograph of an image but in word form. Tom", unquote.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/4/2018 1:43:00 AM

Like it Mick, I could have wrote this lol, it fits perfectly. Send some rain phew

Mick Talbot
Date: 7/4/2018 4:29:00 AM

Indeed you could, my water butts nearly done, no hose pipe yet, but it will come. Mick