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Haiku 102

closed my eyes as the
rhythm of the waterfalls
sang a lullaby

Part 2
I Dreamt Of

angels in heaven
singing a lullaby so...
softly and sweetly


Entry In Ms. P.D.'s April only posted poems contest
Carol Brown
3rd Place Winner

happinessupliftingLullabyhaiku

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Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 12:17 PM

THE SECOND ONE IS DREAMY...SKAT

Judy Ball

June 14, 2012 at 2:33 PM

This has a serene quality. Very beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB

Kash Poet

May 9, 2012 at 2:20 AM

Beautiful haiku Carol.Congrats on your win.

Ravindra K Kapoor

May 5, 2012 at 8:57 PM

Streams, Brooks and Waterfalls always sing songs but it is only few like you, who can hear the rhythms of these sweet and enchanting lullaby. Enchanting beauty unfolds its charms in both parts Carol. Like always great creative paintings by you on the wall of PS. As always I was a joy to read such beautiful lines. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Carol Brown

Patrick Cornwall

April 27, 2012 at 6:32 AM

Interesting haiku... Patrick

Mohammad Reza Zandipoor

April 23, 2012 at 9:00 AM

hi,your haiku is nice and full of mercifulness.enjoyed it.

Laura Breidenthal

April 20, 2012 at 1:41 PM

This is a beautiful piece and it filled me with serenity and piece. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I hope you have a wonderful day! Always, Laura

Phyllis Babcock

April 20, 2012 at 12:36 PM

This poem has a heavenly feel to it. Lovely piece. love phyl

Keith Bickerstaffe

April 20, 2012 at 10:59 AM

Super job, Carol! Perfect 575 structure and sweetly flowing rhythm. God bless, Keith

Debbie Duncan

April 19, 2012 at 5:26 PM

Oh this is great,,, love the way it flows ;} thank you for reading my words,, haven't posted for a while , need to get back into the grove ;} have a sweet day Carol !

Jancarl Campi

April 19, 2012 at 2:26 PM

What a beautiful and warm poem. Jancarl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 19, 2012 at 2:10 PM

yes dear friend time on PS has come to an end for me.. I will be deleting all my poetry and blogs .. a tedious task but will accomplish for as long as it takes.. my last post states the main reason why leaving and u have my email address so please keep in touch.. always will appreciate your luv and wonderful words Carol..

Charmaine Chircop

April 19, 2012 at 10:06 AM

Can hear the song sweet LADY

Daver Austin

April 19, 2012 at 8:07 AM

Very relaxing write, Carol. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver

Black Eyed Susan

April 16, 2012 at 7:08 AM

Glad to see this won! congratulations :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 14, 2012 at 11:26 AM

This is such a soothing read, Carol :) Congrats on your win and I missed greeting you on your birthday, sorry about that-- belated birthday hugs to you :D!!

Joseph May

April 13, 2012 at 6:52 PM

Congrats on a great win Carol...always...Joseph

Broken Butterfly

April 13, 2012 at 1:27 PM

Congratulations Carol on your win with this very pretty poem

Bl Devnath

April 13, 2012 at 10:04 AM

Congrats on your win for this fantastic haiku. Enjoyed well. Loved always, bl

Marty Owens

April 13, 2012 at 9:45 AM

Congrats on your win...Very nice I enjoyed...and thanks for the nice comments...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

April 13, 2012 at 9:44 AM

Had to read this one again -- it's so comforting, Carol. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

April 13, 2012 at 9:43 AM

Carol, I'm looking for some new poems. I'll be in Key West fishing from Sunday through Thursday. Hope you have a great time while I'm gone and post some new work for us to enjoy. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn