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Haiku 102

closed my eyes as the
rhythm of the waterfalls
sang a lullaby
Part 2
I Dreamt Of
angels in heaven
singing a lullaby so...
softly and sweetly
Entry In Ms. P.D.'s April only posted poems contest Carol Brown 3rd Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/12/2015 12:17:00 PM
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Date: 6/14/2012 2:33:00 PM
This has a serene quality. Very beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/9/2012 2:20:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Carol.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/5/2012 8:57:00 PM
Streams, Brooks and Waterfalls always sing songs but it is only few like you, who can hear the rhythms of these sweet and enchanting lullaby. Enchanting beauty unfolds its charms in both parts Carol. Like always great creative paintings by you on the wall of PS. As always I was a joy to read such beautiful lines. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Carol Brown
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Date: 4/27/2012 6:32:00 AM
Interesting haiku... Patrick
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Date: 4/23/2012 9:00:00 AM
hi,your haiku is nice and full of mercifulness.enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/20/2012 1:41:00 PM
This is a beautiful piece and it filled me with serenity and piece. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I hope you have a wonderful day! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/20/2012 12:36:00 PM
This poem has a heavenly feel to it. Lovely piece. love phyl
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Date: 4/20/2012 10:59:00 AM
Super job, Carol! Perfect 575 structure and sweetly flowing rhythm. God bless, Keith
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Date: 4/19/2012 5:26:00 PM
Oh this is great,,, love the way it flows ;} thank you for reading my words,, haven't posted for a while , need to get back into the grove ;} have a sweet day Carol !
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Date: 4/19/2012 2:26:00 PM
What a beautiful and warm poem. Jancarl
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Date: 4/19/2012 2:10:00 PM
yes dear friend time on PS has come to an end for me.. I will be deleting all my poetry and blogs .. a tedious task but will accomplish for as long as it takes.. my last post states the main reason why leaving and u have my email address so please keep in touch.. always will appreciate your luv and wonderful words Carol..
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Date: 4/19/2012 10:06:00 AM
Can hear the song sweet LADY
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Date: 4/19/2012 8:07:00 AM
Very relaxing write, Carol. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver
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Date: 4/16/2012 7:08:00 AM
Glad to see this won! congratulations :)
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Date: 4/14/2012 11:26:00 AM
This is such a soothing read, Carol :) Congrats on your win and I missed greeting you on your birthday, sorry about that-- belated birthday hugs to you :D!!
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:52:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Carol...always...Joseph
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Date: 4/13/2012 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations Carol on your win with this very pretty poem
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win for this fantastic haiku. Enjoyed well. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win...Very nice I enjoyed...and thanks for the nice comments...Marty
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:44:00 AM
Had to read this one again -- it's so comforting, Carol. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:43:00 AM
Carol, I'm looking for some new poems. I'll be in Key West fishing from Sunday through Thursday. Hope you have a great time while I'm gone and post some new work for us to enjoy. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:04:00 AM
A beautyful Haiku duo.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:02:00 AM
revisiting this one. I'ts so lovely. and CONGRATS on your win, Carol.
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Date: 4/12/2012 11:42:00 PM
saying hi, trying to get back up on the soup,,pease check out my new one..thanks carol...
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