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Haiku 102

closed my eyes as the rhythm of the waterfalls sang a lullaby Part 2 I Dreamt Of angels in heaven singing a lullaby so... softly and sweetly Entry In Ms. P.D.'s April only posted poems contest Carol Brown 3rd Place Winner

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 12:17:00 PM

THE SECOND ONE IS DREAMY...SKAT

Judy Ball

Date: 6/14/2012 2:33:00 PM

This has a serene quality. Very beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB

Kash Poet

Date: 5/9/2012 2:20:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Carol.Congrats on your win.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/5/2012 8:57:00 PM

Streams, Brooks and Waterfalls always sing songs but it is only few like you, who can hear the rhythms of these sweet and enchanting lullaby. Enchanting beauty unfolds its charms in both parts Carol. Like always great creative paintings by you on the wall of PS. As always I was a joy to read such beautiful lines. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Carol Brown

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 4/27/2012 6:32:00 AM

Interesting haiku... Patrick

Mohammad Reza Zandipoor

Date: 4/23/2012 9:00:00 AM

hi,your haiku is nice and full of mercifulness.enjoyed it.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/20/2012 1:41:00 PM

This is a beautiful piece and it filled me with serenity and piece. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I hope you have a wonderful day! Always, Laura

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/20/2012 12:36:00 PM

This poem has a heavenly feel to it. Lovely piece. love phyl

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/20/2012 10:59:00 AM

Super job, Carol! Perfect 575 structure and sweetly flowing rhythm. God bless, Keith

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/19/2012 5:26:00 PM

Oh this is great,,, love the way it flows ;} thank you for reading my words,, haven't posted for a while , need to get back into the grove ;} have a sweet day Carol !

Jancarl Campi

Date: 4/19/2012 2:26:00 PM

What a beautiful and warm poem. Jancarl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/19/2012 2:10:00 PM

yes dear friend time on PS has come to an end for me.. I will be deleting all my poetry and blogs .. a tedious task but will accomplish for as long as it takes.. my last post states the main reason why leaving and u have my email address so please keep in touch.. always will appreciate your luv and wonderful words Carol..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/19/2012 10:06:00 AM

Can hear the song sweet LADY

Daver Austin

Date: 4/19/2012 8:07:00 AM

Very relaxing write, Carol. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/16/2012 7:08:00 AM

Glad to see this won! congratulations :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/14/2012 11:26:00 AM

This is such a soothing read, Carol :) Congrats on your win and I missed greeting you on your birthday, sorry about that-- belated birthday hugs to you :D!!

Joseph May

Date: 4/13/2012 6:52:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Carol...always...Joseph

Broken Butterfly

Date: 4/13/2012 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations Carol on your win with this very pretty poem

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/13/2012 10:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win for this fantastic haiku. Enjoyed well. Loved always, bl

Marty Owens

Date: 4/13/2012 9:45:00 AM

Congrats on your win...Very nice I enjoyed...and thanks for the nice comments...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2012 9:44:00 AM

Had to read this one again -- it's so comforting, Carol. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2012 9:43:00 AM

Carol, I'm looking for some new poems. I'll be in Key West fishing from Sunday through Thursday. Hope you have a great time while I'm gone and post some new work for us to enjoy. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn

Erich Goller

Date: 4/13/2012 9:04:00 AM

A beautyful Haiku duo.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2012 6:02:00 AM

revisiting this one. I'ts so lovely. and CONGRATS on your win, Carol.

John Aaron Green

Date: 4/12/2012 11:42:00 PM

saying hi, trying to get back up on the soup,,pease check out my new one..thanks carol...