Haiku

sudden pelting rain
weeping willow umbrella
bird songs continue

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Heidi Sands

September 10, 2018 at 6:27 PM

Very nice Haiku! :)

Warren Doll

October 5, 2018 at 12:59 PM

Hi Heidi, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for visiting.~Warren

Barbara Aquila

July 3, 2018 at 9:09 PM

I can hear rhe birds despite the rain. So true. Love this

Warren Doll

July 4, 2018 at 8:31 AM

I'm very glad that you liked it, Barbara. Nice to hear from you

Sara Kendrick

June 8, 2018 at 10:10 AM

Those birds can handle so much can't they. Sara

Warren Doll

June 8, 2018 at 5:09 PM

Yes , they can. I tried to help them with the weeping willow umbrella. Thank you for your visit, Sara.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 6, 2018 at 2:42 PM

- I can hear them ... beautifully, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

June 6, 2018 at 5:10 PM

I'm glad that you liked it, Anne-Lise. Always glad to hear from you-Big hugs. Warren:)

Charlie Smith

June 6, 2018 at 12:47 PM

Perfectly executed Haiku Warren, well done...

Warren Doll

June 6, 2018 at 5:03 PM

Thank You for your positive comments, Charlie

Robertina B.

June 5, 2018 at 3:57 PM

"An incredible haiku, Warren.. Very enjoyable.. Bravo! "

Warren Doll

June 5, 2018 at 5:05 PM

Hi Robertina, glad to hear from you. Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Warren

Susan Palli

June 5, 2018 at 1:30 PM

Enjoyed this one, thanks!

Warren Doll

June 5, 2018 at 1:37 PM

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Susan. Thanks for your visit.

Winged Warrior

June 5, 2018 at 12:22 PM

Lovely haiku my friend...well crafted...L&L...^WW^

Warren Doll

June 5, 2018 at 12:56 PM

Thank you very much, Winged Warrior

Jan Allison

June 5, 2018 at 11:23 AM

oh what lovely imagery warren, I love weeping willows have written several poems about them:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

June 5, 2018 at 12:54 PM

Thanks so much, Jan. I love weeping willows too. If I see one, I just stop and spend some time to enjoy it.I'll have to look up your poems :) Warren

Mike Gentile

June 5, 2018 at 10:55 AM

Such a lovely haiku, Warren love the weeping willow umbrella !!!

Warren Doll

June 5, 2018 at 12:39 PM

Glad you liked it and thanks for the compliment, Mike

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