Haiku

sudden pelting rain weeping willow umbrella bird songs continue

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Heidi Sands

Date: 9/10/2018 6:27:00 PM

Very nice Haiku! :)

Warren Doll
Date: 10/5/2018 12:59:00 PM

Hi Heidi, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for visiting.~Warren

Barbara Aquila

Date: 7/3/2018 9:09:00 PM

I can hear rhe birds despite the rain. So true. Love this

Warren Doll
Date: 7/4/2018 8:31:00 AM

I'm very glad that you liked it, Barbara. Nice to hear from you

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2018 10:10:00 AM

Those birds can handle so much can't they. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 6/8/2018 5:09:00 PM

Yes , they can. I tried to help them with the weeping willow umbrella. Thank you for your visit, Sara.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/6/2018 2:42:00 PM

- I can hear them ... beautifully, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 6/6/2018 5:10:00 PM

I'm glad that you liked it, Anne-Lise. Always glad to hear from you-Big hugs. Warren:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/6/2018 12:47:00 PM

Perfectly executed Haiku Warren, well done...

Warren Doll
Date: 6/6/2018 5:03:00 PM

Thank You for your positive comments, Charlie

Robertina B.

Date: 6/5/2018 3:57:00 PM

"An incredible haiku, Warren.. Very enjoyable.. Bravo! "

Warren Doll
Date: 6/5/2018 5:05:00 PM

Hi Robertina, glad to hear from you. Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Warren

Susan Palli

Date: 6/5/2018 1:30:00 PM

Enjoyed this one, thanks!

Warren Doll
Date: 6/5/2018 1:37:00 PM

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Susan. Thanks for your visit.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/5/2018 12:22:00 PM

Lovely haiku my friend...well crafted...L&L...^WW^

Warren Doll
Date: 6/5/2018 12:56:00 PM

Thank you very much, Winged Warrior

Jan Allison

Date: 6/5/2018 11:23:00 AM

oh what lovely imagery warren, I love weeping willows have written several poems about them:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 6/5/2018 12:54:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan. I love weeping willows too. If I see one, I just stop and spend some time to enjoy it.I'll have to look up your poems :) Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/5/2018 10:55:00 AM

Such a lovely haiku, Warren love the weeping willow umbrella !!!

Warren Doll
Date: 6/5/2018 12:39:00 PM

Glad you liked it and thanks for the compliment, Mike