Haiku

sun-kissed giant mounds sweltering heat drapes the air hill pigments turn brown 29 May 2018

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Date: 6/5/2018 8:46:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Elaine. Well done.

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 6/6/2018 4:57:00 AM

Hi Line, thank you so much! Warm regards :)

Date: 6/3/2018 5:20:00 PM

great description of a summer scene. Congrats, Elaine.

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 6/5/2018 6:29:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comments Andrea! Much appreciated. Regards :)

Date: 6/3/2018 1:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest. Well done!

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 6/3/2018 1:56:00 AM

Thank you Susan! Much appreciated. Regards :)

Date: 6/2/2018 7:05:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 6/2/2018 8:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise! Sending you summer vibe with warm regards :)

Date: 5/29/2018 5:56:00 AM

Nice images in you ku!

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 5/31/2018 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Kim! I thought of the image of our famous chocolate hills, turning brown during summer. Regards :)