Haiku

sun-kissed giant mounds
sweltering heat drapes the air
hill pigments turn brown


29 May 2018
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Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Congrats on your win, Elaine. Well done.
Gonzales Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Hi Line, thank you so much! Warm regards :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:20 PM
great description of a summer scene. Congrats, Elaine.
Gonzales Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Thank you for your visit and comments Andrea! Much appreciated. Regards :)
Gentry Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:04 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest. Well done!
Gonzales Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:56 AM
Thank you Susan! Much appreciated. Regards :)
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 7:05 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gonzales Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise! Sending you summer vibe with warm regards :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 5:56 AM
Nice images in you ku!
Gonzales Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Thank you Kim! I thought of the image of our famous chocolate hills, turning brown during summer. Regards :)
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