Haiku

furballs fly
                                      sparrows collect
                                         husky nests







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Pett Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Brilliant Maureen, your poems to read and natures beauty to observe what a wonderful life, great haiku. :))
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May 28, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Aw thank you Roy! Sitting in my garden thought to myself there has to be a haiku here. ;) xomo!!
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May 28, 2018 at 4:36 AM
So, so super! Enjoyed reading your cool style of writing. (<= -JWE
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May 28, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Thank you JW! Make'n me blush ;) xomo!
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May 27, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Oh, nice one Mo...love them furballs...love and light...^WW^
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May 27, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you! A lovely day to you! :) xomo
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May 26, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Excellent use of imagery, Maureen. It seems birds are able to lift more than their weight sometimes. Hugs, Carolyn
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May 26, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Carolyn :) they're darling to watch! xomo
One Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Nice...
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May 26, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Merci :) xomo
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May 26, 2018 at 5:42 AM
I had to think for a nanosecond, husky nests, they do don't they. Great haiku Maureen. Mick
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May 26, 2018 at 8:56 AM
They love the stuff. So fun to watch :) thank you! xomo
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May 25, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Lovely imagery, Maureen. Sparrows don't need much out of life.
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May 25, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Thank you Line :) xomo!
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May 25, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Excellent haiku, Maureen..I see their nests in your depiction.
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May 25, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Thank you Vijay :) xomo!
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May 25, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Loved this, nature recycling! :)
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May 25, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Totally ;) thank you! xomo
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May 25, 2018 at 3:44 PM
How delightful, Maureen!
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May 25, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Thanks Mark :) xomo!
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May 25, 2018 at 3:21 PM
That will keep.the cold out for sure Nice image Maureen.
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May 25, 2018 at 9:52 PM
I've been furnishing my resident sparrows for years, they come looking for it :) thank you Tom, xomo!
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May 25, 2018 at 3:13 PM
very vivid imagery Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
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May 25, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Ty Jan! xomo :)
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May 25, 2018 at 3:07 PM
I can see it Maureen! Well done :)
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May 25, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Thank you Heidi :) xomo!
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