Haiku

furballs fly sparrows collect husky nests ***

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Roy Pett

Date: 5/28/2018 9:52:00 AM

Brilliant Maureen, your poems to read and natures beauty to observe what a wonderful life, great haiku. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/28/2018 1:44:00 PM

Aw thank you Roy! Sitting in my garden thought to myself there has to be a haiku here. ;) xomo!!

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 4:36:00 AM

So, so super! Enjoyed reading your cool style of writing. (<= -JWE

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/28/2018 5:44:00 AM

Thank you JW! Make'n me blush ;) xomo!

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/27/2018 7:42:00 AM

Oh, nice one Mo...love them furballs...love and light...^WW^

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2018 10:19:00 AM

Thank you! A lovely day to you! :) xomo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2018 4:54:00 PM

Excellent use of imagery, Maureen. It seems birds are able to lift more than their weight sometimes. Hugs, Carolyn

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/26/2018 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn :) they're darling to watch! xomo

Silent One

Date: 5/26/2018 12:23:00 PM

Nice...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/26/2018 5:28:00 PM

Merci :) xomo

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/26/2018 5:42:00 AM

I had to think for a nanosecond, husky nests, they do don't they. Great haiku Maureen. Mick

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/26/2018 8:56:00 AM

They love the stuff. So fun to watch :) thank you! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/25/2018 5:09:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Maureen. Sparrows don't need much out of life.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/25/2018 10:02:00 PM

Thank you Line :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/25/2018 4:28:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Maureen..I see their nests in your depiction.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/25/2018 9:55:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :) xomo!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/25/2018 3:52:00 PM

Loved this, nature recycling! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/25/2018 9:54:00 PM

Totally ;) thank you! xomo

Mark Toney

Date: 5/25/2018 3:44:00 PM

How delightful, Maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/25/2018 9:53:00 PM

Thanks Mark :) xomo!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/25/2018 3:21:00 PM

That will keep.the cold out for sure Nice image Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/25/2018 9:52:00 PM

I've been furnishing my resident sparrows for years, they come looking for it :) thank you Tom, xomo!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2018 3:13:00 PM

very vivid imagery Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/25/2018 9:48:00 PM

Ty Jan! xomo :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/25/2018 3:07:00 PM

I can see it Maureen! Well done :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/25/2018 9:46:00 PM

Thank you Heidi :) xomo!