Haiku

dog days humid breeze
a chilled glass of lemonade
soaking wet with sweat



~05/16/18
~haiku 'summer' contest by Mick Talbot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:15 PM
this is GREAT!! Congrats. I really liked yours.
Gentry Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest with this true haiku! I enjoyed it.
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 7:09 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Abdul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Love it, I can just feel the heat Abdul. Lazy summer days.
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