Haiku

old lady's veil weeps
memories too deep to hold
    waterlily pond
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Okay, Virginia, clearly you are an experienced haiku poet! Your talent is reflected in this lovely waterlily pond! Beautiful work! Hugs. Pandita
Waters Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:11 AM
thank you all, I am honing my skills in haiku and was happy with this one too.
Lawless Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 4:24 AM
I also like this one....well done
Gentry Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 7:15 PM
I like this.
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