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Haiku

fireworks of July... lawn chairs line...the twilight sky ...citronella oil 5/12/2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/3/2018 9:43:00 PM

Well done, Kim. Congrats on your top win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2018 9:46:00 PM

Thanks, Line!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 4:59:00 PM

This sounds so nice and summery!! Congrats on your win .

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2018 8:25:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 9:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the summer haiku contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2018 8:25:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Elaine Gonzales

Date: 6/2/2018 9:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win Kim! A delightful haiku with a bang :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2018 9:16:00 PM

Thank you, Elaine! :)

Warren Doll

Date: 6/2/2018 9:07:00 AM

Congratulations, Kim. Wonderful haiku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2018 5:48:00 PM

Thanks, Warren!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/2/2018 9:00:00 AM

Swinging back to offer congratulations on a superb win! Well-deserved! Hugs. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2018 5:48:00 PM

Hugs, Pandita! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:19:00 AM

- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2018 8:54:00 AM

Hugs to you, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2018 12:10:00 PM

- Scent of summer, Kim - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2018 9:18:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Susan Palli

Date: 5/13/2018 4:23:00 AM

Good one, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2018 6:28:00 AM

Thanks, Susan!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/13/2018 3:55:00 AM

Lovely image Kim, trust them mozzies to try and spoil things. Keep a mozzie at bay eat marmite (works for me lol) Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2018 6:28:00 AM

Hmm! Will have to look that up, Tom!

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/12/2018 11:24:00 PM

I love the ambience of your lovely and festive Haiku, Kim. Great imagery and last line! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2018 6:27:00 AM

Thanks, Susan!

Mark Toney

Date: 5/12/2018 10:13:00 PM

Nice one, Kim. I can hear it, see it and smell it :) -Mark

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2018 10:14:00 PM

Thanks,Mark!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2018 9:01:00 PM

Awesome imagery and witty surprise at the end -darn mosquitoes can spoil a great celebration. :-)! Love it! Pandita

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2018 9:10:00 PM

For sure! Thanks and hugs, Pandita!