Haiku

fireworks of July... lawn chairs line...the twilight sky ...citronella oil 5/12/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Well done, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Thanks, Line!
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 4:59 PM
This sounds so nice and summery!! Congrats on your win .
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Gentry Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Congratulations on your win in the summer haiku contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Gonzales Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Congratulations on your top win Kim! A delightful haiku with a bang :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Thank you, Elaine! :)
Doll Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations, Kim. Wonderful haiku.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Thanks, Warren!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Swinging back to offer congratulations on a superb win! Well-deserved! Hugs. Pandita
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Hugs, Pandita! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 7:19 AM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Hugs to you, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 12:10 PM
- Scent of summer, Kim - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Palli Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 4:23 AM
Good one, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Cunningham Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:55 AM
Lovely image Kim, trust them mozzies to try and spoil things. Keep a mozzie at bay eat marmite (works for me lol) Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Hmm! Will have to look that up, Tom!
Ashley Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:24 PM
I love the ambience of your lovely and festive Haiku, Kim. Great imagery and last line! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 6:27 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Toney Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Nice one, Kim. I can hear it, see it and smell it :) -Mark
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thanks,Mark!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Awesome imagery and witty surprise at the end -darn mosquitoes can spoil a great celebration. :-)! Love it! Pandita
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 9:10 PM
For sure! Thanks and hugs, Pandita!
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