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Haiku 101 summer’s fragile reeds now ice-layered bend to write our names in the snow

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Date: 12/11/2013 9:24:00 AM
sweet and deep haiku... xox...PD
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Date: 12/11/2013 9:46:00 AM
Thanks, Linda... Jack
Date: 11/30/2013 10:20:00 PM
yes here is another one, equally good!!
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:26:00 PM
Thanks again... Jack
Date: 11/30/2013 11:48:00 AM
I hope you had an excellent Thanksgiving Jack. I dropped by to see if you wrote 102.
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Date: 11/30/2013 11:28:00 AM
from summer to winter, names engraved.. terrific 'ju, jack... huggs
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:31:00 AM
I like the feel of this one Jack. Have a great day.
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Date: 11/29/2013 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Richard, and you as well... Jack
Date: 11/26/2013 11:39:00 AM
Ahhh!! This is an excellent one..Enjoyed reading this it today..Sara
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Date: 11/26/2013 12:11:00 PM
Thanks for reading it, Sara... Jack
Date: 11/26/2013 4:28:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, Jack! - I want to make snow angels :))) - Have a nice day dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I too enjoy snow angels, but we rarely have enough snow to make them. When we do it's usually a blizzard. Oh well... This is Oklahoma... Jack
Date: 11/25/2013 5:35:00 PM
Jack this Haiku tells a very complete story very nice work
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Date: 11/25/2013 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph... Jack