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Haiku 101

Haiku 101 summer’s fragile reeds now ice-layered bend to write our names in the snow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 9:24:00 AM

sweet and deep haiku... xox...PD

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/11/2013 9:46:00 AM

Thanks, Linda... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 10:20:00 PM

yes here is another one, equally good!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/30/2013 10:26:00 PM

Thanks again... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2013 11:48:00 AM

I hope you had an excellent Thanksgiving Jack. I dropped by to see if you wrote 102.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2013 11:28:00 AM

from summer to winter, names engraved.. terrific 'ju, jack... huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2013 11:31:00 AM

I like the feel of this one Jack. Have a great day.

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/29/2013 1:24:00 PM

Thanks, Richard, and you as well... Jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2013 11:39:00 AM

Ahhh!! This is an excellent one..Enjoyed reading this it today..Sara

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/26/2013 12:11:00 PM

Thanks for reading it, Sara... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/26/2013 4:28:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Jack! - I want to make snow angels :))) - Have a nice day dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/26/2013 9:29:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I too enjoy snow angels, but we rarely have enough snow to make them. When we do it's usually a blizzard. Oh well... This is Oklahoma... Jack

Joseph Sergi

Date: 11/25/2013 5:35:00 PM

Jack this Haiku tells a very complete story very nice work

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/25/2013 6:13:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph... Jack