Haiku 101

Haiku 101
	
	
	summer’s fragile reeds
	now ice-layered   bend to write
	our names in the snow

naturewinterhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 9:24 AM

sweet and deep haiku... xox...PD

Jack Jordan

December 11, 2013 at 9:46 AM

Thanks, Linda... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2013 at 10:20 PM

yes here is another one, equally good!!

Jack Jordan

November 30, 2013 at 10:26 PM

Thanks again... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

November 30, 2013 at 11:48 AM

I hope you had an excellent Thanksgiving Jack. I dropped by to see if you wrote 102.

Nette Onclaud

November 30, 2013 at 11:28 AM

from summer to winter, names engraved.. terrific 'ju, jack... huggs

Richard Lamoureux

November 29, 2013 at 11:31 AM

I like the feel of this one Jack. Have a great day.

Jack Jordan

November 29, 2013 at 1:24 PM

Thanks, Richard, and you as well... Jack

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2013 at 11:39 AM

Ahhh!! This is an excellent one..Enjoyed reading this it today..Sara

Jack Jordan

November 26, 2013 at 12:11 PM

Thanks for reading it, Sara... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 26, 2013 at 4:28 AM

- Lovely haiku, Jack! - I want to make snow angels :))) - Have a nice day dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

November 26, 2013 at 9:29 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I too enjoy snow angels, but we rarely have enough snow to make them. When we do it's usually a blizzard. Oh well... This is Oklahoma... Jack