Haiku

the fisherman casts ---
his net only catches fish
as the light escapes.

March 5, 2018
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Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:07 PM
very interesting imagery, Jack. Congrats on the list. I really like this.
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:04 PM
many congrats Jack:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Congratulations on your win! :) mo
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Jack, the imagery is fabulous... eve
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:33 AM
- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Jack :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:22 PM
Lovely, Jack. Congrats on your top win.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Brilliant haiku in the style of the masters! Best regards. Pandita
Webster Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:19 PM
thank you, Pandita!
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