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our blood 'tis a bag
of primordial ocean
landlubber lament
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Allison Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 5:08 PM
many congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:17 PM
very cool. And I sure wish I could record like you do. It took me forever to record the few I have up here with my voice. Congrats on your win.
Anderson Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Hi, As I note in my blog [ https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=33542&PoetID=79720 ] I cheat and use online tools which convert text into sound. It is easy to do and the results are better than recording my voice. You can add extra pronunciation to get the pauses in the right place etc.
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on your great win, John, love the imagery ... eve
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:39 AM
- Congratulations on your great 4th place in the contest, John :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:50 PM
Perplexing. Congrats on your win, John.
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