Haiku

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our blood 'tis a bag of primordial ocean landlubber lament

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2018 5:08:00 PM

many congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:17:00 PM

very cool. And I sure wish I could record like you do. It took me forever to record the few I have up here with my voice. Congrats on your win.

John Anderson
Date: 5/13/2018 3:36:00 PM

Hi, As I note in my blog [ https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=33542&PoetID=79720 ] I cheat and use online tools which convert text into sound. It is easy to do and the results are better than recording my voice. You can add extra pronunciation to get the pauses in the right place etc.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, John, love the imagery ... eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great 4th place in the contest, John :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:50:00 PM

Perplexing. Congrats on your win, John.