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Save the whales...enough said

'haiku'

diver ship harpoon 
a calf alone in open 
the sea is quiet 


 
haiga-haiku-theme sea-ocean-5-7-5 contest
Sponsored by Mick Talbot 

5-3-2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Wow! This is great, Charles. Thank you for stopping by my page. My haiku whale came from a list of haiku words. Love your take.
Ellison Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 8:24 AM
A winner for sure!!! Cheers!
Messina Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Thank you Jack! Thanks for taking some time out to read! Cheers!
Cunningham Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:23 AM
Great hakiu Charles, and to think they used to be slaughtered in their thousands to provide oil for streetlights, thank god for electricity. Good luck. Tom.
Messina Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 6:51 AM
Thanks Tom, coming from you that's an honor. (esp. because I just learned haiku, I've read your work and it's terrific! Thanks for the visit my friend. All the best, Charlie
Michael Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Good imagery...powerful messaging...I like this ...
Messina Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Thanks Arturo, now let's hope I did all things right for the contest. Thanks for the visit...
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