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Save the whales...enough said

diver ship harpoon a calf alone in open the sea is quiet haiga-haiku-theme sea-ocean-5-7-5 contest Sponsored by Mick Talbot 5-3-2018

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2018 4:52:00 PM

Wow! This is great, Charles. Thank you for stopping by my page. My haiku whale came from a list of haiku words. Love your take.

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/4/2018 8:24:00 AM

A winner for sure!!! Cheers!

Charles Messina
Date: 5/4/2018 9:26:00 AM

Thank you Jack! Thanks for taking some time out to read! Cheers!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/4/2018 12:23:00 AM

Great hakiu Charles, and to think they used to be slaughtered in their thousands to provide oil for streetlights, thank god for electricity. Good luck. Tom.

Charles Messina
Date: 5/4/2018 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Tom, coming from you that's an honor. (esp. because I just learned haiku, I've read your work and it's terrific! Thanks for the visit my friend. All the best, Charlie

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/3/2018 3:31:00 PM

Good imagery...powerful messaging...I like this ...

Charles Messina
Date: 5/3/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Arturo, now let's hope I did all things right for the contest. Thanks for the visit...