Haiku

grand old oak

               of Sherwood Forest
  
                                  seasoned wood


5/1/2018

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/2/2018 8:54:00 PM

Brilliant haiku incorporating all the elements in just a few powerful lines! Bravo on a well-deserved win! Best regards. Pandita

Roy Pett
Date: 5/3/2018 2:21:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Pandita which is really appreciated, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Eve Roper

Date: 5/2/2018 7:49:00 PM

great imagery, Roy, they are a beautiful tree ... congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve

Roy Pett
Date: 5/3/2018 2:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Eve, oaks are beautiful, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

MD Johnson

Date: 5/2/2018 7:28:00 PM

Well done. Congratulations!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/3/2018 2:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations MD really appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/2/2018 6:59:00 PM

I love your grand haiku, Roy, and the lovey imagery - especially ingenious is the use of the word 'seasoned' in your last line - brilliant! The old oak looks magnificent as well. A great haiku and congratulations on your well deserved win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Roy Pett
Date: 5/3/2018 2:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Susan, the major oak is magnificent and Sherwood Forest has so much history and the home of Robin Hood and his merry men, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/2/2018 6:42:00 PM

Roy, Had the photo been attached and it was a haiga contest then 2 would have become 1. Love the haiku, must be over 30 years since I was down that way, is it still there? Congratulations on your 2nd place, Mick

Roy Pett
Date: 5/3/2018 2:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement in your contest Mick, wasn’t sure what a haiga was had to look this up and now understand, the major oak is still standing approx age between 800- 1000 years old, thanks again, looking forward to your next contest. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2018 5:39:00 PM

old and seasoned. Those two words go so well for it. Congrats on your win.

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 5:42:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Andrea really appreciated. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2018 5:06:00 PM

beautiful haiku Roy:-) Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 5:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Jan really appreciated. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/2/2018 4:51:00 PM

Very nice Roy! :) Congratulations !

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 5:02:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Heidi, I’m so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support really appreciated. :))

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/2/2018 4:44:00 PM

Wow - lovely to bring up the image of Sherwood Forest. Congrats on your win, Roy.

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 4:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Line, Sherwood Forest has so much history and a wonderful place to visit, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2018 4:02:00 PM

A grand oak and a grand winning entry, Roy! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 4:54:00 PM

Thanks Paul for your congratulations and very kind comment much appreciated. :))

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/2/2018 3:52:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your 2nd place win! I knew you had a winner. :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 4:53:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Susan, an accomplished poet such as you can identify a good poem, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/2/2018 2:06:00 PM

Back with congratulations Roy. Tom

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Tom for your congratulations really appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/2/2018 1:39:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/2/2018 4:49:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Anne-Lise, much appreciated. :))

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/1/2018 1:22:00 PM

Great haiku!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/1/2018 2:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan, you are too kind and much appreciated. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 5/1/2018 7:55:00 AM

I love it. You got my vote Roy ;) xomo!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/1/2018 2:21:00 PM

Thanks Maureen, this oak tree is an important part of our history, your comment and vote is just as important to me so thank you. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/1/2018 7:51:00 AM

It sure looks grand and seasoned--well captured, Roy!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/1/2018 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Vijay, this oak tree is believed to be over 800 years old, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2018 6:22:00 AM

Lovely image you've done Roy, even Robin Hood came to mind. Good luck. Tom.

Roy Pett
Date: 5/1/2018 2:10:00 PM

Thanks Tom for your best wishes and very kind comment, If I could be anyone real or myth it would be Robin Hood, thanks again for your support much appreciated.

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