Haiku

haiku

majestic
mahogany tree - 
my old bed


04-29-2018

Contest:      haiku - Trees - 3-5-3
Sponsor:     Mick Talbot
Placement:   1st

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
mahogany bed....last saw at least 20 years back.I wish I had one..nostalgia. Love.
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Date: 5/5/2018 12:26:00 PM
My dear old friend, Rajat, I am so delighted to hear from you! Thank you for your lovely compliments. I hope all is well with you and that you have a relaxing weekend! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 5/5/2018 9:48:00 AM
Oh I love it! Congratulations on your win! xomo :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/5/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thank you - thank you, dear Maureen! It's always great to hear from you! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/4/2018 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved acknowledgement. Stay bright.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/4/2018 1:08:00 PM
Awww! Thank you kindly, my sweet friend! Have a great weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/3/2018 11:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win Pandita...I knew this one would be up there...fantastic...Charlie
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/3/2018 12:22:00 PM
Hi Charlie, thank you so much for swinging back with your welcomed congratulatory words! Thank you again. Best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 9:11:00 PM
Great imagery, Pandita, this one makes me sleepy ... congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/3/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, my dear Eve, for your lovely comment and kind congratulatory words which I appreciate! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 7:07:00 PM
This one made me laugh out loud :-) Congratulations on your fine ku.
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:24:00 PM
Hi MD, I so very much appreciate your lovely compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed ithis piece! Thank you so much for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 6:24:00 PM
Stunning hakiu Pandita, Congratulations. Tom.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/2/2018 8:20:00 PM
Hi Tom, thank you for visiting and leaving me your wonderful words which I appreciate! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 5:33:00 PM
I really really like yours!! Congrats on the win, Pandita.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/2/2018 8:21:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I thank you for your lovely compliments! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita with your wonderful haiku. :))
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/2/2018 8:26:00 PM
Hello Roy, thank you for visiting and leaving me your wonderful words which I appreciate! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 4:57:00 PM
Garland in plush bedding. I rest my head on silk a pillow. Supported, I read haiku, such a pleasure. Your haiku, along with many more, an anthology of winners. Multiple wonders of the form, I thank you, humbled I choose yours to join that throng congratulation Pandita. Mick
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/2/2018 8:29:00 PM
Dear Mike, thank you so very much for placing this piece so high with your anthology of winners! I am delighted to be in such great company! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 4:56:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win Pandita:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:22:00 PM
My friend Jan, I thank you for your lovely compliments! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 4:37:00 PM
Sweet, Pandita. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:18:00 PM
Hi Line, you're so sweet to leave me your kind message and compliments! Thank you so much. Regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 3:50:00 PM
I envy your lovely strong wooden bed, Pandita:) Congratulations on your top win! Regards // paul
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/2/2018 8:16:00 PM
My dear Paul, thank you so much for your kind congratulatory words! When I was growing up, all our furniture was made from beautiful mahogany, strong and durable! Thank you, my friend! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Excellent haiku.
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:43:00 PM
Hi Susan, thank you so very much!! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 1:29:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/2/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thank you - thank you, dear Anne-Lise, for your kind congratulatory words! Have a beautiful day full of sunshine! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/2/2018 2:01:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:21:00 AM
Hi Ravi, I hope you are doing well, my friend! Your comments and compliments always mean a lot to me. Thank you very much! Pandita
Date: 4/29/2018 4:18:00 PM
oh how clever pandita and i really love that final line:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:23:00 PM
My dear Jan, thank you ever so much for leaving me your sweet, encouraging words! Best regards always and hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/29/2018 3:44:00 PM
I bedded down many times beneath the covers of the trees. Great Imagery Pandita...Good Luck in the contest...Stay well.....Charlie
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/29/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, my friend Charlie! Even your compliments read like a lovely poem! I appreciate you! Best regards and hugs! Pandita
Date: 4/29/2018 3:27:00 PM
Aw! This reminds me of my double Cottonwood tree where my Daddy built us a tree house. Smartly written, and made me happy, because it brought out a great memory, Pandita.
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Date: 4/29/2018 6:57:00 PM
Hi Caren, I'm so thrilled to know that you can connect to this piece with such a lovely memory! That is a huge compliment. Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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