Haiku

Do not shun The tree of knowledge Eat the fruit 28 April 2018

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 5/1/2018 9:19:00 PM

So glad you like it, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2018 6:15:00 PM

oh so cool. I Love this symbolic theme in your haiku

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/1/2018 9:20:00 PM

So glad you like it, Andrea

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/28/2018 6:20:00 PM

Hello Geoffrey, I so agree with your Haiku. Well done. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2018 5:27:00 PM

Your welcome, i only speak English. i am a widow my husbsnd was french. I am not french. have a nice day my friend.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/29/2018 3:49:00 AM

Merci, Darlene