Haiku

his lying blue eyes
hide behind dark sun glasses ...
he cannot fool me

Human nature haiku contest
Sponsored by Mick Talbot 

4/25/18

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Eve Roper

May 1, 2018 at 7:44 PM

Back with {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison

May 2, 2018 at 4:19 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

April 30, 2018 at 9:40 AM

So many hide being dark glasses, what are they hiding ? Congratulations Jan. Tom

Jan Allison

May 2, 2018 at 4:19 PM

They are hiding those lyin eyes Tom:-( hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 29, 2018 at 6:14 PM

oh, one of yours I missed!! Wish I could keep up, Jan. I'm off to vacuum now and then will try to finish up here. It is fun going through these winner lists and seeing all the winners. Congrats for your win. Yep, I know this kind of guy. They can't fool US.

Jan Allison

April 30, 2018 at 4:13 AM

Think we have all met someone like this Andrea:-( hugs jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani

April 27, 2018 at 5:49 PM

Lying eyes, either evasive or hidden behind dark glasses. lol. I like it.

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 5:54 PM

thanks Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

April 27, 2018 at 2:38 PM

a clever 'ku, jan...sweet congrats on your grreat win!..huggs

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 2:43 PM

thanks so much Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

April 27, 2018 at 2:31 PM

Wow. I am sure I knew him. This one really moves a reader. Great haiku. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 2:38 PM

I think we've all met someone like this Sian:-( hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

April 27, 2018 at 8:37 AM

Love this, Jan! Nicely done! Congrats!

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 2:37 PM

Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

April 27, 2018 at 7:50 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 2:37 PM

thanks so much Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 27, 2018 at 6:23 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:23 AM

Thanks Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

April 26, 2018 at 11:38 PM

Nicely done, Jan, congratulations on your win!! Hugs

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:23 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

April 26, 2018 at 11:08 PM

Deliciously sly. Congrats on your win, Jan.

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:23 AM

Thanks line:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

April 26, 2018 at 9:58 AM

The lying blue eyes are the worst, one expects them to be true, Well done !!

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:24 AM

Thanks mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

April 26, 2018 at 8:41 AM

Oh clever this is Jan..Love it.

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:25 AM

i detest being lied to Harry:-(:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

April 26, 2018 at 6:59 AM

well done, Jan.

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:26 AM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Aurore Severo

April 25, 2018 at 11:51 PM

Yes glasses can be a mask :) peace and love xoxoxo

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:27 AM

They sure can Aurore:-( hugs jan xx

Arturo Michael

April 25, 2018 at 7:33 PM

He'll have a hard time fooling you with his eyes...but his body will try its best...

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 6:28 AM

yes body language gives the game away too:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

April 25, 2018 at 5:15 PM

Sounds like a bad seed! Vivid haiku here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison

April 25, 2018 at 5:20 PM

He definitely can the trusted!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

April 25, 2018 at 4:55 PM

Especially when he wears them when the sun doesn't shine. Interesting and very well thought of...Nice write...Good luck in the contest...Hugs // Charlie

Jan Allison

April 25, 2018 at 5:04 PM

Great comment charlie, I love the eagles song, you can't hide those lyin eyes:-) hugs Jan xx