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his lying blue eyes hide behind dark sun glasses ... he cannot fool me Human nature haiku contest Sponsored by Mick Talbot 4/25/18

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2018 7:44:00 PM

Back with {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2018 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/30/2018 9:40:00 AM

So many hide being dark glasses, what are they hiding ? Congratulations Jan. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2018 4:19:00 PM

They are hiding those lyin eyes Tom:-( hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 6:14:00 PM

oh, one of yours I missed!! Wish I could keep up, Jan. I'm off to vacuum now and then will try to finish up here. It is fun going through these winner lists and seeing all the winners. Congrats for your win. Yep, I know this kind of guy. They can't fool US.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2018 4:13:00 AM

Think we have all met someone like this Andrea:-( hugs jan xx

Abdul Malik

Date: 4/27/2018 5:49:00 PM

Lying eyes, either evasive or hidden behind dark glasses. lol. I like it.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 5:54:00 PM

thanks Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/27/2018 2:38:00 PM

a clever 'ku, jan...sweet congrats on your grreat win!..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 2:43:00 PM

thanks so much Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 4/27/2018 2:31:00 PM

Wow. I am sure I knew him. This one really moves a reader. Great haiku. Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 2:38:00 PM

I think we've all met someone like this Sian:-( hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2018 8:37:00 AM

Love this, Jan! Nicely done! Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 2:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/27/2018 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 2:37:00 PM

thanks so much Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2018 6:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:23:00 AM

Thanks Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/26/2018 11:38:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan, congratulations on your win!! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:23:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/26/2018 11:08:00 PM

Deliciously sly. Congrats on your win, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:23:00 AM

Thanks line:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/26/2018 9:58:00 AM

The lying blue eyes are the worst, one expects them to be true, Well done !!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:24:00 AM

Thanks mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/26/2018 8:41:00 AM

Oh clever this is Jan..Love it.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:25:00 AM

i detest being lied to Harry:-(:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/26/2018 6:59:00 AM

well done, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:26:00 AM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Aurore Severo

Date: 4/25/2018 11:51:00 PM

Yes glasses can be a mask :) peace and love xoxoxo

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:27:00 AM

They sure can Aurore:-( hugs jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/25/2018 7:33:00 PM

He'll have a hard time fooling you with his eyes...but his body will try its best...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2018 6:28:00 AM

yes body language gives the game away too:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/25/2018 5:15:00 PM

Sounds like a bad seed! Vivid haiku here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2018 5:20:00 PM

He definitely can the trusted!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 4/25/2018 4:55:00 PM

Especially when he wears them when the sun doesn't shine. Interesting and very well thought of...Nice write...Good luck in the contest...Hugs // Charlie

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2018 5:04:00 PM

Great comment charlie, I love the eagles song, you can't hide those lyin eyes:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/25/2018 3:49:00 PM

ooh - excellent, jan! best of luck...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2018 4:09:00 PM

Thanks ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2018 1:35:00 PM

- Excellent, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2018 1:41:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) I'd rather classify it as a sentry but the rules call it haiku so I will stick with that:-) hugs Jan xx