Haiku

a cool seduction as willows...lured to water drawn too close...we fall 24 feb 2018

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Date: 5/1/2018 7:41:00 PM

Geoffrey, great imagery ...congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/1/2018 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, Eve.

Date: 4/29/2018 6:11:00 PM

Congrats for your win. I love willow trees and poems about them.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/1/2018 9:14:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I share your love of Willows - they seem created for pictures and poems.

Date: 4/27/2018 2:06:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Geoffrey:-) hugs Jan xx

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/28/2018 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, Jan.

Date: 4/27/2018 9:21:00 AM

Congrats on your win-- your lines prompted my younger self to recall how often he did fall...

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/27/2018 10:12:00 AM

C’est l’amour. C’est la vie! Thanks, L.J.

Date: 4/27/2018 7:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A thought-provoking haiku.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/27/2018 10:08:00 AM

Thanks Susan. I hope the thoughts were not too sad.

Date: 4/27/2018 6:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Geoffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/27/2018 10:06:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise.

Date: 4/26/2018 11:06:00 PM

Very sensuous, Geoffrey. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/27/2018 10:05:00 AM

Thank you, Line

Date: 4/24/2018 10:02:00 PM

I like the mysterious quality of your haiku, Geoffrey. Enjoyed this :)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/25/2018 12:52:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation, Laura.