Haiku

a cool seduction 
as willows...lured to water
drawn too close...we fall

24 feb 2018
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Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Geoffrey, great imagery ...congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
Brewer Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Congrats for your win. I love willow trees and poems about them.
Brewer Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I share your love of Willows - they seem created for pictures and poems.
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Geoffrey:-) hugs Jan xx
Brewer Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Carber Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Congrats on your win-- your lines prompted my younger self to recall how often he did fall...
Brewer Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:12 AM
C’est l’amour. C’est la vie! Thanks, L.J.
Gentry Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. A thought-provoking haiku.
Brewer Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Susan. I hope the thoughts were not too sad.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:24 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Geoffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brewer Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise.
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Very sensuous, Geoffrey. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Brewer Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Line
Leiser Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 10:02 PM
I like the mysterious quality of your haiku, Geoffrey. Enjoyed this :)
Brewer Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Laura.
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