Haiku

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I don't know if this is a haiku I never wrote one, but here goes.

Dumbfound innocent Climbing the Cecropia Slow motion at best

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/25/2018 10:36:00 PM

Excellent haiku!

Charles Messina
Date: 4/25/2018 10:56:00 PM

Thanks again Susan...That's a wonderful compliment considering this is my first attempt at haiku! Much appreciated! Good night...stay well!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/25/2018 5:22:00 PM

Fabulous haiku I really love that final line. I've a poem about a sloth in a cherry tree:-) soupmail:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina
Date: 4/25/2018 5:40:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for your kind words, Jan I will certainly be reading that one! Like John Lennon once said, "I hope I passed the audition" (lol) Hugs // Charlie xx