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I don't know if this is a haiku I never wrote one, but here goes.

Haiku

Dumbfound innocent  
Climbing the Cecropia 
Slow motion at best
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Excellent haiku!
Messina Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Thanks again Susan...That's a wonderful compliment considering this is my first attempt at haiku! Much appreciated! Good night...stay well!
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:22 PM
Fabulous haiku I really love that final line. I've a poem about a sloth in a cherry tree:-) soupmail:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:40 PM
Wow! Thanks for your kind words, Jan I will certainly be reading that one! Like John Lennon once said, "I hope I passed the audition" (lol) Hugs // Charlie xx
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