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craving afterlife aspiring for the heaven… a human folly ~04/24/18 ~haiku "Human Nature" contest by Mick Talbot

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2018 7:21:00 PM

Abdul, great imagery..congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2018 2:53:00 AM

Hopefully heaven is where most of us will go to. Great hakiu Abdul. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 5:23:00 PM

I just aspire to not be faced with nothing. I am hoping wherever we end up, there is good food and movies. Congrats on your win.

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/29/2018 5:30:00 PM

movies...I am with you. Food? I am not too sure. I wonder they serve Indian food? lol

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2018 1:54:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

L. J. Carber

Date: 4/27/2018 8:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Abdul-- of course, one man's folly might be another man's wisdom

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/27/2018 5:32:00 PM

Yeah, tell me about it!

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/27/2018 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wellwell-written haiku. Very nice.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2018 6:34:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Abdul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/26/2018 10:46:00 PM

A profound write, Adbul. Congrats on your win.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/24/2018 5:42:00 PM

I like your haiku, Abdul. I don't believe in an afterlife and heaven - I think this life is it. So make the most of it rather than hoping for better afterwards.

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/24/2018 6:01:00 PM

Ha, I find a kindred spirit in you, Agnes. Thanks for concurring with me. So I said so! Appreciate your comment very much.