Haiku

hunger for your touch
before last bit of day gone
seed of life is formed

4/24/2018


Poetry Contest: haiku 
Sponsored By:	Mick Talbot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cunningham Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:04 PM
What a gem, Eve. Congrats for this win.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations and blessings Eve.
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Carber Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Wow,Eve! You caught in 3 lines the essence of procreation---congrats on your win
Gentry Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful and unique haiku. Well written.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:30 AM
- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Lots of room for interpretation. Well done, Eve. Congrats on your win.
Salehi Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 1:05 AM
Wow Neil Diamond's music in haiku... I hunger for your touch... Nice
Smith Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Beautiful Haiku Eve, best wishes...
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Charlie .. Hugs Eve~`*
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Oh, what a special event! Children conceived in such love are off to a great start. Loved your haiku, Eve!
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Carolyn .. Hugs Eve~`*
Callus Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 10:47 AM
The fruit of love and affection, Eve! Good luck in the contest. Hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Paul.. Hugs Eve~`*
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 5:35 AM
- Lovely, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Sunshine .. Hugs Eve~`*
Sathasivam Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 3:56 AM
Excellent haiku. Enjoyed reading it.
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Ravi.. Hugs Eve~`*
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