Haiku

golden fins
compose on gilded parchment…
        koi pond at sunset

            19 Apr 2018
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Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 9:47 PM
beautiful, David ~
Doll Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 3:16 PM
A truly fantastic haiku, David.
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Lovely, David. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 1:55 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the haiku contest, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery.
Pett Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win David with your great haiku.:))
Talbot Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your gold medal win David, a scene I've witnessed many a time... Miick
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:39 PM
this is really pretty!
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